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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. NYPg
Nowadays, parents are facing some rules and regulations that are hard to follow because it includes like "don't say no to kids". Number of people are thinking that it would be a great idea for the school system to teach their students how to be a good parent. I believe that it is not necessary for teachers to educate young people specifically about parenting. However, a person's character or personality defines on how they were raised but infact it is not always in the hands of parents. Since, earth consumes a large population it seems hard to not meet different types of personalities which results to being matured enough to understand how to treat someone who is kind or rude. Anyway, teaching a student how to be a good person is enough to be a parent because it really depends on the student on whom they want to grow up like. For instance, having a bad influence like a friend circle full of not well raised people will definitely affect the person itself. Moreover, every human being learn from their mistakes and cannot just memorize things like steps on how to be a good parent from school. Actually, having some skills will absolutely help in parenting because it can be improved by learning from the experience. For example, growing up in a terrible environment can either change the person to be a better one or be a worst for the rest their life. To conclude, schools can educate students with some rules of discipline and saying words like thank you, welcome, and please but definitely cannot teach a person on how to be a good mom or dad since it's not their job yet. Infact, I disagree, because there are so many lessons for specific age to be learned apart from parenting.
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will definitely affect the
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itself.

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memorize things like steps on how to be a
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from school. Actually, having
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to be a better one or be a worst for the rest their life.

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rules
of discipline and saying words like thank you, welcome, and
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but
definitely cannot teach a
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on how to be a
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mom or dad since it's not their job
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IELTS essay Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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