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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. ynXE
We are living in a world where advertisements are abundant in any type of media we might consume or just merely by existing in this world we are heavily being exposed to all sorts of adverts which most people would find to be annoying since everyone tries to come up with the craziest ideas with which they can try and push their most absurd product ideas to the people they try to appeal to. However, advertisements can not only be incredibly annoying and irritating but also cause tremendous effects on younger or more impressionable people like smoking, drinking ads or in general ads that can be highly addicting among the youth. These days, especially with the rise of technology and the increase in people who spend their time on the internet, ads are experiencing greater development than ever by being displayed everywhere on our devices trying to trick us into buying their product by looking as appealing to mostly a younger audience as possible who may end up wasting their parent's money on some meaningless item that might happen to be popular among others. It's sad to see advertisements mostly being about numbers these days and about who can sell the most units of their product instead of having an actual innovative idea that could help the person or the world in a positive way rather than heavily being driven by the money factor. These features might be prominent in today's adverts however, occasionally there will be actual useful things being advertised which might be for the better even though creativity is not what is being awarded most these days rather than those who can speak the loudest. So my conclusion to adverts would be that they are mostly being served as money-making machines instead of having the core factor of having a useful attribute which would suggest why most people are fed up with them being displayed everywhere.
We are living in a world where advertisements are abundant in any type of media we
might
consume or
just
merely
by existing in this world we are
heavily
being exposed
to all sorts of adverts which most
people
would find to be annoying since everyone tries to
come
up with the craziest
ideas
with which they can
try and
push their most absurd product
ideas
to the
people
they try to appeal to.

However
, advertisements can not
only
be
incredibly
annoying and irritating
but
also
cause tremendous effects on younger or more impressionable
people
like smoking, drinking ads or
in general
ads that can be
highly
addicting among the youth.

These days,
especially
with the rise of technology and the increase in
people
who
spend their time on the internet, ads are experiencing greater development than ever by
being displayed
everywhere on our devices trying to trick us into buying their product by looking as appealing to
mostly
a younger audience as possible
who
may
end
up wasting their parent's money on
some
meaningless item that
might
happen to be popular among others.

It's sad to
see
advertisements
mostly
being about numbers these days and about
who
can sell the most units of their product
instead
of having an actual innovative
idea
that could
help
the person or the world in a
positive
way
rather
than
heavily
being driven
by the money factor.

These features
might
be prominent in
today
's adverts
however
,
occasionally
there will be actual useful things
being advertised
which
might
be for the better
even though
creativity is not what is
being awarded
most these days
rather
than those
who
can speak the loudest.

So
my conclusion to adverts would be that they are
mostly
being served
as money-making machines
instead
of having the core factor of having a useful attribute which would suggest why most
people
are fed
up with them
being displayed
everywhere.
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IELTS essay Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
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