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Some people think it is good to have a good relationship with others as a friend while others think it will lead to sexual intercours. Diss you both sides and give your overall opinion?

Some people think it is good to have a good relationship with others as a friend while others think it will lead to sexual intercours. Diss you both sides and give your overall opinion? nRP7e
Some individuals are the opinion of having a good relationship with a stranger person is the best way to start socializing with others, while others claim that it leads to unhappiness from the aspect of sexual assaults. In my view, having one particular person in life is an indispensable part of all human beings and by this way, we will bring passive outcome. In our contemporary world, interacting with people from different cultures has been extremely common for us to get to know more about each other. Morever,
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IELTS essay Some people think it is good to have a good relationship with others as a friend while others think it will lead to sexual intercours. Diss you both sides and give your overall opinion?

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