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Some people think it is easy to learn a language without the help of a teacher? Do you agree with this opinion? Which method of language learning do people prefer in your country? v.1

Some people think it is easy to learn a language without the help of a teacher? Do you agree with this opinion? Which method of language learning do people prefer in your country? v. 1
Acquiring new dialect, for wide range of reasons, has always fascinated human beings. A wide section of this society is of the opinion that a new form of speech can be learned without support from an able instructor. My discourse ahead will place my opinion on this perception along with listing down the various ways my countrymen adopt while learning a new language. I believe that a new form of speech can certainly be self taught. Foremost, acquainting oneself with a language is a matter of personal interest. Individuals who are really keen to learn a new dialect usually motivate themselves and try out various practical and useful ways of skill acquisition. Further, the vast range of available books and the content available on the internet has widened the choices of learners. Through these sources the students can get information about the grammar rules, pronunciation and other technical information about language of their choice. For example, there are several websites offering tips and inputs about various international languages to their subscribers. Citizens in my motherland have several options at their disposal. Though most of them, I believe, choose to enrol themselves with coaching centres. They find it easy to develop their language skills under the guidance of a competent teacher. Some people, especially those living in urban areas, prefer to learn a new lingo form with the help of available texts and e-learning modules. These people are the ones who are not only exposed to technology but also are usually short on time. Finally, a diminutive section of learners try to develop their skills by interacting with their associates who are well versed with the language. For instance, I have seen several of my colleagues develop their English language skill by merely interacting with those good at it. To conclude, I am of the firm view that any form of verbal communication can be learnt if an individual has the curiosity. Having a teacher for it may not be necessary at all. However, the largest section of my society likes to play it safe by nurturing their language skills under an expert’s supervision.
Acquiring
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new
dialect, for wide range of reasons, has always fascinated human beings. A wide section of this society is of the opinion that a
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new
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form
of speech can
be learned
without support from an able instructor. My discourse ahead will place my opinion on this perception along with listing down the various ways my countrymen adopt while learning a
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new
language.

I believe that a
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new
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form
of speech can
certainly
be
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self taught
. Foremost, acquainting oneself with a
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language
is a matter of personal interest. Individuals who are
really
keen to learn a
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new
dialect
usually
motivate themselves and try out various practical and useful ways of
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skill
acquisition.
Further
, the vast range of available books and the content available on the internet has widened the choices of learners. Through these sources the students can
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get
information about the grammar
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rules
, pronunciation and other technical information about
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language
of their choice.
For example
, there are several websites offering tips and inputs about various international
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languages
to their subscribers.

Citizens in my motherland have several options at their disposal. Though most of them, I believe, choose to enrol themselves with coaching
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centres
. They find it easy to develop their
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language
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skills
under the guidance of a competent teacher.
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Some
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people
,
especially
those living in urban areas, prefer to learn a
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new
lingo
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form
with the
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help
of available texts and e-learning modules. These
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people
are the ones who are not
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only
exposed to technology
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but
also
are
usually
short on time.
Finally
, a diminutive section of learners
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try
to develop their
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skills
by interacting with their associates who are well versed with the
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language
.
For instance
, I have
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seen
several of my colleagues develop their English
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language
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skill
by
merely
interacting with those
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good
at it.

To conclude
, I am of the firm view that any
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form
of verbal communication can be
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learnt
if an individual has the curiosity. Having a teacher for it may not be necessary at all.
However
, the largest section of my society likes to play it safe by nurturing their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
under an expert’s supervision.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think it is easy to learn a language without the help of a teacher? Do you agree with this opinion? Which method of language learning do people prefer in your country? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
353 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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