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Some people think it is better to have a friend who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have a friend who always disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people think it is better to have a friend who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have a friend who always disagree with them. v. 1
There is a popular saying "friends can make or mar your". It is believed by some populace that it is preferable to pick friends with the same opinions as them while other people think  otherwise. In my opinion, I believe the latter is the case as it is better to have pals who at times disagree with your views. On the one hand,   having friends who share the same views as yours helps to reduce quarrels thereby fostering unity. Having the same opinion means that there will be no room for differences as the friends will always  be in agreement in any circumstances faced and this will go a long way in preserving the friendship. For instance, In the recent publicized breakup of the partnership and friendship of "Warner Bros" who were three childhood friends, the major reason for the quarrel was because they had opposing perspectives concerning an issue that needed to be resolved. However, if they all had the same view, this would not have happened. On the other hand, I believe that having friends who oppose with your view is recommended as this helps to gain new ideas thereby broadening your knowledge. Most times,   in the walk of life, we are faced with situations that needs fresh input or another perspective which is completely different from ours and the ability to get this viewpoint might be the key to solving the problem at hand, thus, having friends in your corner with different input will definitely go a long way in getting new ideas and increasing your thinking. For example, a Dallas policeman was in a dilemma as to how to resolve a murder case, he had tried all he could think of, however, after discussing the issue with his friend, he brought a new perspective to the case and they were able to unravel the murder and identify the culprit. To conclude,   It is often said that friends can not play together without having issues and this is welcomed as long as it is a healthy quarrel. This essay argued that having acquaintance with varying points is good as this helps widen your knowledge.
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friends can
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make
or mar your
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. It
is believed
by
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some
populace that it is preferable to pick
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friends
with the same opinions as them while other
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people
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think
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otherwise
. In my opinion, I believe the latter is the case as it is better to have pals
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who
at times disagree with your views.

On the one hand,
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having
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friends
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who
share the same views as yours
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helps
to
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reduce
quarrels thereby fostering unity.
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Having
the same opinion means that there will be no room for differences as the
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friends
will always
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be in agreement in any circumstances faced and this will go a long way in preserving the friendship.
For instance
, In the recent publicized breakup of the partnership and friendship of
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"
Warner Bros
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"
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who
were three childhood
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friends
, the major reason for the quarrel was
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because
they had opposing perspectives concerning an issue that needed to
be resolved
.
However
, if they all had the same view, this would not have happened.

On the other hand
, I believe that
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having
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friends
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who
oppose with your view
is recommended
as this
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helps
to gain new
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ideas
thereby broadening your knowledge. Most times,
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in the walk of life, we
are faced
with situations that needs fresh input or another perspective which is completely
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different
from ours and the ability to
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get
this viewpoint might be the key to solving the problem at hand,
thus
,
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having
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friends
in your corner with
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different
input will definitely go a long way in getting new
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ideas
and increasing your thinking.
For example
, a Dallas policeman was in a dilemma as to how to resolve a murder case, he had tried all he could
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think
of,
however
, after discussing the issue with his
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friend
, he brought a new perspective to the
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case and
they were able to unravel the murder and identify the culprit.

To conclude
,
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It is
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often
said that
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friends
can not play together without
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having
issues and this
is welcomed
as long as it is a healthy quarrel. This essay argued that
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having
acquaintance with varying points is
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good
as this
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helps
widen your knowledge.
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IELTS essay Some people think it is better to have a friend who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have a friend who always disagree with them. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 8.0
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