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Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. OV6py
Everyone in this world have their own rules, while selecting their mates in life. Some prefer friends according to their coice, taste and some for their convenience. There has been as argue among some demographics about the suggestion of opting fellows. It is to be pondered by few civilized ones that we should always have friendship with those who are having same thoughts as we have, whilst other contradict this. However, in my views I agree with the people of latter thoughts who oppose the first group by saying that having fellows who diapprove you are the bestest mates ever. While, talking about first group, in their perspectives, it is an excellent option to make relations with those, who are having same ideas as you. This all in the light of fact that, with this we are able to make good bonding with them. Consequently relationship go longer time because of absence of misunderstanding with each other. Moreover, having equivalent thinking makes thing easy for understandingand the work will occur smoothly. To cite an example, the researchers occupying same ideas, same mentality can find the result of any research rapidly. Whereas, the remaing individuals consider that the above discussed topic makes bonding weaker. There will be no mode of entertainment and whole circle becomes boring or monotonous. As in my views, if attachment with those who carries distinct notion makes project interesting as a result it takes lesser time, instead of spending whole time on one task, since these varieties of ideas benefits for taking shortcuts to complete tasks. For instance, an experiment was conducted to check which group is better of separate thoughts or like thoughts and it was found that in group where everyone carries variation of ideas is more successful rather than other group. To conclude, I believe that having friends of distinct opinion makes relationships stronger, interesting opposing the other one.
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, while selecting their mates in life.
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prefer friends according to their
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coice
, taste and
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some
for their convenience. There has been as argue among
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some
demographics about the suggestion of opting fellows. It is to
be pondered
by few civilized ones that we should always have friendship with those
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who
are
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having
same
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thoughts
as we have, whilst
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other
contradict this.
However
, in my views I
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agree
with the
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people
of latter
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thoughts
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who
oppose the
first
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group
by saying that
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having
fellows
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who
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diapprove
you are the
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bestest
mates ever.

While, talking about
first
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group
, in their perspectives, it is an excellent option to
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make
relations with those,
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who
are
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having
same
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ideas
as you. This all in the light of fact that, with this we are able to
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make
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good
bonding with them.
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Consequently
relationship go longer time
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because
of absence of misunderstanding with each
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other
.
Moreover
,
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having
equivalent thinking
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makes
thing easy for
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understandingand
the work will occur
smoothly
. To cite an example, the researchers occupying same
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ideas
, same mentality can find the result of any research
rapidly
.

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Whereas
, the
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remaing
individuals consider that the above discussed topic
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makes
bonding weaker. There will be no mode of entertainment and whole circle becomes boring or monotonous. As in my views, if attachment with those
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who
carries distinct notion
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makes
project interesting
as a result
it takes lesser time,
instead
of spending whole time on one task, since these varieties of
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ideas
benefits for taking shortcuts to complete tasks.
For instance
, an experiment
was conducted
to
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check
which
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group
is better of separate
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thoughts
or like
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thoughts
and it
was found
that in
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group
where everyone carries variation of
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ideas
is more successful
rather
than
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other
group.

To conclude
, I believe that
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having
friends of distinct opinion
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makes
relationships stronger, interesting opposing the
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other
one.
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IELTS essay Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
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