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IT IS OFTEN ARGUED THAT IF STUDENTS ARE SCARED OF TEACHER IT IS BETTER WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT TEACHER SHOULD HAVE FRIENDLY RELATION WITH STUDENTS. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND WILL STATE THE PROS AND CONS OF EACH VIEW. AS PER MY OPINION THERE SHOULD BE BALANCE OF BOTH. FIRSTLY, IF THE STUDENTS ARE AFRAID OF THEIR PROFESSORS THEY WILL BE MORE SERIOUS IN THEIR STUDIES AND WILL PUT AN EXTRA EFFORT TO KEEP THEM HAPPY. ON THE OTHER HAND, THEY WILL ALWAYS TRY TO HIDE THEIR PROBLEMS AND DOUBTS FROM THEM AS THEY WILL BE HAVING SENSE OF SCARE. ADDITIONALLY, THE WARM RELATION OF TEACHER AND STUDENT WILL ALWAYS PROVIDE SECURITY AND TRUST BETWEEN EACH OTHER WHICH WILL MOTIVATE THE STUDENTS TO WORK HARD BUT EVERYTHING HAS IT'S DISADVANTAGES ALSO THIS ATTITUDE MAY ALSO LEAD TO LENENACY WHICH WILL LEAD TO LEAST ATTENTION TO DISCIPLINE IN THE SCHOOL. IN MY VIEW THE BEST SCENARIO WOULD BE TO HAVE BOTH OF THE QUALITIES IN A TEACHER SO THAT RIGHT ENVIRONMENT WOULD BE THERE IN THE SCHOOL IN WHICH STUDENT CAN PROSPER AND LEARN.

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OFTEN
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STUDENTS
ARE SCARED
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TEACHER
 IT IS BETTER WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
TEACHER
 SHOULD HAVE FRIENDLY RELATION WITH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
STUDENTS
. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND WILL STATE THE PROS AND CONS OF EACH VIEW. AS PER MY OPINION THERE SHOULD BE BALANCE OF BOTH. FIRSTLY
, IF THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
STUDENTS
 ARE AFRAID OF THEIR PROFESSORS THEY WILL BE MORE SERIOUS IN THEIR STUDIES AND WILL PUT AN EXTRA EFFORT TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
KEEP
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, THEY WILL ALWAYS TRY TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :covermask
HIDE
 THEIR PROBLEMS AND DOUBTS FROM THEM AS THEY WILL BE HAVING SENSE OF SCARE. ADDITIONALLY
, THE WARM RELATION OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
TEACHER
 AND You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
STUDENT
 WILL ALWAYS PROVIDE SECURITY AND TRUST BETWEEN EACH OTHER WHICH WILL MOTIVATE THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
STUDENTS
 TO WORK This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
HARD
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
 EVERYTHING HAS Did you mean “its” (possessive pronoun) instead of ‘it’s’ (short for ‘it is’)?Its
IT'S
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LENENACY
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LEAST
 ATTENTION TO DISCIPLINE IN THE SCHOOL. IN MY VIEW THE BEST SCENARIO WOULD BE TO HAVE BOTH OF THE QUALITIES IN A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
TEACHER
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 THAT RIGHT ENVIRONMENT WOULD BE THERE IN THE SCHOOL IN WHICH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
STUDENT
 CAN PROSPER AND LEARN. 