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Some people think history has bothing little to tell us, but others. think that striding the past history can help in better runderstand the present. Please two views and give your own disenss the Opinion.

Some people think history has bothing little to tell us, but others. think that striding the past history can help in better runderstand the present. Please two views and give your own disenss the Opinion. BWrd6
There are due opinion's garding the history, some one of the noting that nothing or litted to tell, whereas others one of the support to leaving the past history can suggest us better understorad the scent time. Both the views are explained in ensuing in forthcoming paragrap Drawing the former view, history camnet provide technical knomiledge. Nowadays - majory of people are depend the technical things, while no facilities available in past. Due to this, Individual cannot lean technological things by past history. they study less about how to work Another reason is that facilities. It. provides comformers to compare with post time and It gives more free time. style Explaining the later view, the history provides well experience about the solution of conflict. In post, people create war for solution of conflict which is the reason for lose of relations, financial and management. Frobviduals beam that One to this, is the not premenant solution of any conflict and they learn other way to solve the problem nowadays which in the cause for Save their lose and this attitude make -profits in every stage. Part time provide well experience for present to current citeration to calve the majob Lische without drawbacks. predict To recapitulate. These are new points of individuals. Some arne engpart opposite to less logening theorghs history because of Jochrilogy while others are claim that past time gives enough experience for how to selve conflict and lose. If question, I gain profit from stopping strongly support to recond view because it is the increas advantages.
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,
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litted
to
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tell
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past
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history
can suggest us better
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understorad
the scent
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time
. Both the
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views
are
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in ensuing in
forthcoming
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paragrap


Drawing the former
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,
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history
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camnet
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provide
technical
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knomiledge
. Nowadays
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-
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majory
of
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people
are
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depend
the technical things, while no facilities available in
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past
. Due to this, Individual cannot lean technological things by
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past
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history
.
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they
study less about how to work Another reason is that facilities. It.
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provides
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comformers
to compare with post
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time
and It gives more free
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time
.
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style


Explaining the later
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view
, the
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history
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provides
well experience about the solution of
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conflict
. In post,
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people
create war for solution of
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conflict
which is the reason for lose of relations, financial and management.
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Frobviduals
beam that One to this, is the not
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premenant
solution of any
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conflict and
they learn other way to solve the problem nowadays which in the cause for Save their lose and this attitude
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make
-profits in every stage. Part
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time
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provide
well experience for present to
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current
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to calve the
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majob
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Lische
without drawbacks.
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Some
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arne
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opposite to less
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logening
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theorghs
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history
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because
of
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Jochrilogy
while others are claim that
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gives
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enough
experience for how to
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selve
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conflict
and lose. If
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question
, I gain profit from stopping
strongly
support to
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recond
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view
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IELTS essay Some people think history has bothing little to tell us, but others. think that striding the past history can help in better runderstand the present. Please two views and give your own disenss the Opinion.

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