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Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space other think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on earth. Which of this opinions do you agree with.

Some developing countries such as India and china spending prohibitively huge some of money on space research. While, some people think this, as, that government is wasting money. Where as, other might think that Authorities responsibility is to provide fundamental things to the deprive people. Thus, this essay supports that bureocrafts should pramote the spacecraft because it is paramount important in the modern senorio. First and foremost, enhancing the satillite technology is prominent in the modernworld. For, communicating and telecasting, to illustrate this, satellite has a tremendeous benifits for mankind, with the help of satellite technology we could able to get information from other countries. Another utilitarian like Internet, it is depend wholly on satellite undoutedly this days every walk of humankind is influenced by the Internet. Even, this satellite is helpful in science and technology study. Further, it is useful in weather and forecast. In mateorology, satellite plays a essential role. on the dark side, satellite technology is astronomically expensive. Beside, it is mandatory for the government to fullfill the rudimentary needs of the people such as food, shelter and other utilities. Moreover, this technology would not favourable for the impoverished people. In Addition, spending money lavishly on outer space technology in not ideal, Instead, it can be used for the public basic amenities. In the nutshell, developing satellite technology in the techno world is substantive to enhance the modern technology. Nevertheless, in developing countries it is significant to bestow the basic needs for the people who are below poverty.

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developing countries
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some of money
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people
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think
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think
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. Thus
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pramote
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because
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important
 in the modern Possible spelling mistake found.scenariosenoritasenorsenorasenorassenors
senorio
.

First
 and foremost, enhancing the Possible spelling mistake found.satellite
satillite
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technology
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modernworld
. For, communicating and telecasting, to illustrate this, satellite has a Possible spelling mistake found.tremendous
tremendeous
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benifits
 for mankind, with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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technology
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could able
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get
 information from other countries. Another utilitarian like Internet, it is Consider using either the past participle “depended” or the present participle “depending” here.dependeddepending
depend
 wholly on satellite Possible spelling mistake found.undoubtedly
undoutedly
It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.this day'sthese days
this days
 every walk of humankind is influenced
 by the Internet. Even, this satellite is helpful in science and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 study. Further
, it is useful in weather and forecast. In Possible spelling mistake found.meteorology
mateorology
, satellite plays Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.an
a
 essential role.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.On
on
 the dark side, satellite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 is astronomically
 expensive. Did you mean “besides” (= apart from that) which is commonly used to start a sentence?Besides
Beside
, it is mandatory for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to Possible spelling mistake found.fulfillfull fill
fullfill
 the rudimentary needs of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 such as food, shelter and other utilities. Moreover
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technology
 would not Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourable’ is British English.favorable
favourable
 for the impoverished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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, spending money lavishly
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technology
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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for the public basic amenities.

In the nutshell, developing satellite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 in the techno world is substantive to enhance the modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. Nevertheless
, in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
 it is significant to bestow the basic needs for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who are below poverty. 