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Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business options. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that climate change is detrimental for companies, whereas others believe that climate change offers many business opportunities and so is good for companies. In this essay I will discuss both the perspectives, but I agree with the former side. On the one hand, those who believe climate change negatively impacts companies give the following reasons. Firstly, climate change poses a physical risk to many companies. For example, extreme weather events like hurricanes, snowstorms and floods force many companies to close operation for days. Many sectors like agriculture that heavily depend on climate and natural resources suffer a lot because of extreme environmental conditions. Secondly, in order to comply with regulations on greenhouse gas emissions, companies have to spend a lot of money on upgrades to polluting facilities and on the installation of emission control systems. On the other hand, there are many reasons why some people believe that climate change is beneficial for businesses. The most Important reason is that climate change spurs innovation, inspiring new products and services which are environmental friendly. For example, global carmakers are transitioning to electric vehicles, energy companies are shifting towards renewable energy. Climate crisis has led to growth of many companies that make green products. Many businesses have found success by catering to consumers who make environmentally conscious choices when they shop. From large multinationals to local startups, all companies are capitalizing on the green revolution. Companies are also able to reduce their operational costs by being more energy efficient. I believe climate change is damaging for businesses. In addition to the increasing operational costs related to new technologies and new regulations, businesses also face competition by new startups that offer cleaner products. Another climate related risk to companies is the legal risk and potential liability for emitting greenhouse gases. For example. in the recent years a lot of legal cases have been brought against fossil fuel companies and they have been held accountable for the damaging effects of climate change. This also damages a company's reputation and in extreme cases can lead to consumer boycotting them. In conclusion. I believe that climate change has many adverse business outcomes like higher operational costs, legal challenges and reputation damage.
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companies
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whereas others
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offers
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and
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negatively
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companies
give the following reasons.
Firstly
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change
poses a physical

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to
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companies
.
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, extreme weather
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events
like hurricanes,

snowstorms and floods force
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companies
to close operation for days.
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sectors like agriculture that
heavily
depend on
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climate
and natural resources

suffer a lot
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because
of extreme environmental conditions.
Secondly
, in order to

comply with regulations on greenhouse gas emissions,
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companies
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have to
spend

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a lot of
money on upgrades to polluting facilities and on the installation of

emission control systems.

On the other hand
, there are
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reasons why
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some
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people
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believe
that

climate
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change
is beneficial for
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businesses
. The most
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Important
reason is that

climate
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change
spurs innovation, inspiring
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new
products and services which are

environmental friendly.
For example
, global carmakers are transitioning to

electric vehicles, energy
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companies
are shifting towards renewable energy.

Climate crisis has led to growth of
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many
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companies
that
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make
green products.

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businesses
have found success by catering to consumers who
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make


environmentally
conscious choices when they shop. From large multinationals

to local startups, all
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companies
are capitalizing on the green revolution.

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Companies
are
also
able to
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reduce
their operational costs by being more energy

efficient.

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believe
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change
is damaging for
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businesses
.
In addition
to the

increasing operational costs related to
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new
technologies and
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new
regulations,

businesses
also
face competition by
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new
startups that offer cleaner products.

Another
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climate
related
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risk
to
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companies
is the legal
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risk
and potential liability

for emitting greenhouse gases.
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in
the recent years
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a lot of
legal

cases have
been brought
against fossil fuel
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companies and
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been held


accountable for the damaging effects of
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change
. This
also
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's reputation and in extreme cases can lead to consumer boycotting

them.

In conclusion
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that
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has
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adverse business

outcomes like higher operational costs, legal challenges and reputation damage.
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IELTS essay Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business options.

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  American English
13 paragraphs
370 words
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