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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree??

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Books are inspection of knowledge and are true friend of one, but some people think that books are losing its significance as a source of information and entertainment. I agree with this notion that in this advanced world books are not getting elevation. To initiate with, people read books to find councel and get knowledge but it take their abundance of time to find particular information on particular page. Books devour a lot of its readers to find any specific thing. But the internet is more aiding and time saving. If you want to know about something you can easily search it on the internet and get any information without any strain. In addition to this, nowadays for entertainment purpose people prefer to see Netflix web series or YouTube. In books you can only read but on this internet channel you can see anything which enthrall you. Moreover, today's generation thinks that book reading is a humdrum task. Instead of reading books, they prefer to watch movies or do their favourite things. Even in the schools, teachers teach students via screen attached to the projector because what students see they learn it better and remember for long time. To summarise, books have their significance and book readers prefer to read but with the time books will completely wane. Internet will oust books and their importance.
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are not getting elevation.

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knowledge
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their abundance of time to find particular information on particular page.
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devour
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a lot of
its readers to find any specific thing.
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But
the internet is more aiding and time saving. If you want to know about something you can
easily
search it on the internet and
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get
any information without any strain.

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to this, nowadays for entertainment purpose
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people
prefer to
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Netflix web series or YouTube. In
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read
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on this internet channel you can
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anything which enthrall you.

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's generation
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reading is a humdrum task.
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, they prefer to
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movies or do their
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things. Even in the schools, teachers teach students via screen attached to the projector
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what students
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they learn it better and remember for long time.

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,
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have their significance and
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readers prefer to read
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with the time
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books
will completely wane. Internet will oust
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and their importance.
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IELTS essay Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. ?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
225 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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