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Some people that fast food should be banned school and Colleges while others think not . What is your opinion.

Some people that fast food should be banned school and Colleges while others think not. What is your opinion. pXyM9
There is always been debate that opinions regarding the level of fast food has become concern for peoples. On the one hand, other think it is a good for is while other think it is not. In my point of view that it is good in terms of socity if we use it as long as circumspectilly. I will discuss my point of view upcoming paragraph along with fully appropriate examples as well as relevant examples. However, It should be noted that i am partially agree in this statement.
There is always been debate that opinions regarding the level of
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food has become concern for peoples. On the one hand, other
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think
it is a
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good
for is while other
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think
it is not. In my point of view that it is
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in terms of
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socity
if we
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it as long as
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circumspectilly
. I will discuss my point of view upcoming paragraph along with
fully
appropriate examples
as well
as relevant examples.
However
, It should
be noted
that
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i
am
partially
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agree
in this statement.

IELTS essay Some people that fast food should be banned school and Colleges while others think not. What is your opinion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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