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Some people support development of agriculture like factory farming will oppose discuss both views and give your opinion

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Opinion different out which method of agriculture is the best. A handful of people are in favour of factory farming whereas, others still sport traditional methods of agriculture. Although this essay will discuss both of views at I agree with letter statement which is about traditional methods. Considering the factor about why majority of people support technical and scientific methods of agriculture, one of the prominent factor can be more productivity. To explain it, by using technological methods 50 tractors and users people will able to increase your productivity. Another reason is to produce unseasonal fruits and vegetables farmer use numerous chemicals and pesticides, due to which they can provide such fruits and vegetable which are not grow naturally. For example, cauliflower is a vegetable which usually grow in a winter season but due to the demands of customers it can be produced in summer by using scientific methods of agriculture as a result because of aforementioned benefits more and more modern agricultural. On the hand, are few people still prefer to use traditional ways of farming as compared to modern farming because traditional methods give them healthier foods. As traditional methods does not include any fertilizers and pesticides for growing crops which may be harmful for human while, Technology involve a great amount of chemicals. For example, pumpkin with his which is summer season vegetable is growing in winter by using some injection for increase its size which may cause fat all diseases such as cancer moreover, majority of people demands naturally grown Fruit and Vegetables that is why people still give priority to ancient methods. In conclusion, while scientific May rise the productivity of farmerment, I personally feel that earlier methods comes immensely handy for health because this provides and healtheir food the modern agriculture.
Opinion
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agriculture
is the best. A handful of
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people
are in
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favour
of factory farming whereas, others
still
sport
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traditional
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methods
of
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agriculture
.
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Although
this essay will discuss both of views at I
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agree
with letter statement which is about
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traditional
methods.

Considering the factor about why
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majority of
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people
support technical and scientific
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methods
of
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agriculture
, one of the prominent factor can be more productivity. To
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explain
it, by using technological
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methods
50 tractors and users
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people
will able to increase your productivity. Another reason is to produce
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unseasonal
fruits and
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vegetables
farmer
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use
numerous chemicals and pesticides, due to which they can provide such fruits and
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vegetable
which are not
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grow
naturally
.
For example
, cauliflower is a
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vegetable
which
usually
grow in a winter season
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but
due to the demands of customers it can
be produced
in summer by using scientific
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methods
of
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agriculture
as a result
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because
of aforementioned benefits more and more modern agricultural.

On the hand, are few
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people
still
prefer to
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use
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traditional
ways of farming as compared to modern farming
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because
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traditional
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methods
give them healthier foods. As
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traditional
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methods
does not include any fertilizers and pesticides for growing crops which may be harmful for human while, Technology involve a great amount of chemicals.
For example
, pumpkin with his which is summer season
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vegetable
is growing in winter by using
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some
injection for increase its size which may cause
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fat
all diseases such as cancer
moreover
,
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majority of
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people
demands
naturally
grown Fruit and
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Vegetables
that is
why
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people
still
give priority to ancient methods.

In conclusion
, while scientific May rise the productivity of
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farmerment
, I
personally
feel that earlier
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methods
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comes
immensely
handy for health
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because
this provides and
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healtheir
food the modern
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agriculture
.
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IELTS essay Some people support development of agriculture like factory farming will oppose discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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