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Some people says that zoo's should be closed down and whereas other think opposite. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

Undoubtedly, zoo is a facility that maintains collection of wild animals. It is highly controversial issue that whether zoo's should be shuts down or not. Personally, I opine that zoo's are helpful in protecting wild animals and some other birds. Let us deliberate both the notions along with my own perspective in upcoming paragraphs. There are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. To plunge into the most intrinsic one is that it prevent the extinction of unique animals. To justify, zoo's are helpful in protecting endangered animals. Due to different reasons, some species are extincting and zoo prevent the extinction of unique breeds of animals like lions, tiger and black dear by taking proper care of them. For instance, in chandigarh, had established a wide range of shelters, food and many other things are provided to animals. As a result, zoo's are required for nourishment of the dangerous and extinct species of animals.

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prevent
 the extinction of unique You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. To justify, Did you mean the plural instead of the possessive?zoos
zoo's
 are helpful in protecting endangered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. Due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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some
 species are extincting and zoo This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the extinction of unique breeds of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 like lions, tiger and black dear by taking proper care of them. For instance
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chandigarh
, had established a wide range of shelters, food and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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animals
. As a result
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zoo's
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dangerous
 and extinct species of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. 