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some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more

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It is universally accepted that conventional newspapers are on the wane and not essential for the development of modern social. Although e-paper is stronger than paper version in some of aspect, I also believed that they have never completely replaced. It is esily understood thhat some people advocate eschew paper publication in favor of digital version. The most important reason why the trend is increase is that reading online news is sustantial faster. Instead of buying printed newspaper in newsstand, these days people can seize a big option stay up date rapidly information in the world by single click from electronic devices which is connected to internet. In addition, inter –based newspaper can bring free experiences because most online news do not require to pay money for them. This situation encourage people reduce traditional newspaper. Although there is a bunch of benificial, I believed that there is also a range of reasons for refusing to delete conventional newspaper. Firstly, some people tend to chose printed newspaper. For example, the old are not proficient in technology and their eye are not good for reading news throught screen of computer or mobile phone so that they always are attracted by paper publication. Moreover the disapperance of printed materials affect to other industries like publishers or logging companies to downsite which could trigger mass unemployment. In conclusion, despite undenable benefits of online newspapers, Iam conviced that conventional news still has an important role to play in modern society.
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that conventional
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newspapers
are on the wane and not essential for the development of modern social. Although e-paper is stronger than paper version in
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some of aspect
, I
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believed that they have never completely replaced.

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thhat
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some
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people
advocate eschew paper publication in favor of digital version. The most
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important
reason why the trend is increase is that reading online
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news
is
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sustantial
faster.
Instead
of buying printed
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newspaper
in newsstand, these days
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people
can seize a
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big
option stay up date
rapidly
information in the world by single click from electronic devices which
is connected
to internet.
In addition
, inter –based
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newspaper
can bring free experiences
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because
most online
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news
do not require
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to pay
money for them.
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This situation encourage
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people
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reduce
traditional newspaper.

Although there is a bunch of
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benificial
, I believed that there is
also
a range of reasons for refusing to delete conventional
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newspaper
.
Firstly
,
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some
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people
tend to chose printed
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newspaper
.
For example
, the
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old
are not proficient in technology and their eye are not
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good
for reading
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news
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throught
screen of computer or mobile phone
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so
that they always
are attracted
by paper publication.
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the
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disapperance
of printed materials affect to other industries like publishers or logging
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companies
to
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downsite
which could trigger mass unemployment.

In conclusion
, despite
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undenable
benefits of online
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newspapers
,
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conviced
that conventional
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still
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role to play in modern society.

IELTS essay some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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