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Fast food, such as hamburgers and pizzas, may be convenient but they can also be unhealthy. What’s your opinion?

Fast food, such as hamburgers and pizzas, may be convenient but they can also be unhealthy. What’s your opinion? 8Lnx5
In hustle and bustle, people always have colossal workloads needed sorting out. Therefore, we have no much time to take care of ourselves, including eating in moderation. Fast food is an alternative thing which can solve this problem. However, it is bad for our health. That is the reason I take a dim view of eating junk food which I will elaborate some reasons to reinforce my viewpoint in the following essay. To begin with, as its name, fast food is the thing which is prepared quickly. It is truly convenient because we just order, immediately we can enjoy it. Therefore, it appreciates for busy people who have a hectic schedule without spending any time on cooking and do the washing up or maybe awkward people who have no good command of doing the household chores. In addition, junk food suits every pocket that we can eat whenever we want without considering the income. For this reason, it is considered a top priority of people. Nevertheless, parallel with these advantages it brings, it exists some aspects of restriction. Ingredients in fast food such as meat, vegetable do not ensure the quality of them, maybe meat is provided by dead pigs, cows or vegetable is sprayed by pesticide. If we eat fried food, our bodies will absorb a large amount of cholesterol. It means that it will gradually destroy our hearts and liver. It will be much worse when junk food is fried by reused oil. By the way of clarification, fast food has a negative impact on our health. All things considered, fast food is really convenient which can meet every accommodation. However, in the long term, it takes a toll on our health. Hopefully, everyone will have an objective view of this food. Since then, we should quit bad habits and make good habits because of our health.
In hustle and bustle,
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people
always have colossal workloads needed sorting out.
Therefore
, we have no much time to take care of ourselves, including eating in moderation.
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Fast
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food
is an alternative thing which can solve this problem.
However
, it is
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bad
for our health.
That is
the reason I take a dim view of eating junk
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food
which I will elaborate
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some
reasons to reinforce my viewpoint in the following essay.

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begin
with, as its name,
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fast
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food
is the thing which
is prepared
quickly
. It is
truly
convenient
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because
we
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just
order, immediately we can enjoy it.
Therefore
, it appreciates for busy
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people
who have a hectic schedule without spending any time on cooking and do the washing up or maybe awkward
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people
who have no
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good
command of doing the household chores.
In addition
, junk
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food
suits every pocket that we can eat whenever we want without considering the income.
For this reason
, it
is considered
a top priority of
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people
.

Nevertheless
, parallel with these advantages it brings, it exists
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some
aspects of restriction. Ingredients in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
such as meat, vegetable do not ensure the quality of them, maybe meat
is provided
by dead pigs, cows or vegetable
is sprayed
by pesticide. If we eat fried
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food
, our bodies will absorb a large amount of cholesterol. It means that it will
gradually
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destroy
our hearts and liver. It will be much worse when junk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is fried
by reused oil. By the way of clarification,
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fast
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food
has a
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negative
impact on our health.

All things considered,
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fast
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food
is
really
convenient which can
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meet
every accommodation.
However
, in the long term, it takes a toll on our health.
Hopefully
, everyone will have an objective view of this
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food
. Since then, we should quit
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bad
habits and
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make
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good
habits
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because
of our health.
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IELTS essay Fast food, such as hamburgers and pizzas, may be convenient but they can also be unhealthy. What’s your opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
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