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Some people say that watching sports (either on TV or at live sports events) is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence.

Some people say that watching sports (either on TV or at live sports events) is a waste of time. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence. RwDN8
Over the last few decades there has been a considerable change in many people's attitudes towards the problem of watching sports or going to watch sports at the stadium. Some people think that spending time on sport programs is very useful, while others are against this point of view. Personally, I tand to believe that this activity is extremely important in lives of many people. First of all, watching sports make some people feel amazing because they like this type of activity and get pleasure from seeing anything related to this topic. For instance, a large proportion of people adore doing sports and such people usually love spending their time on going to sport events or even taking part in some competitions. Secondly, this activity can bring positive emotions to your house due to the fact that a person watches TV or goes to see football, tennis, basketball, and other sports, with his relative and friends. Moreover, among people there are a lot of sport fans that cannot live without sports even a minute, they like not only to watch sports, but also to have a conversation with sportsmen. For example, my friend is keen on tennis and he does not miss any Grand Slam finals, he visited Roland garros, US Open, Australian Open. He met Federer and Nadal twice. However, some individuals believe that, nowadays, there is much more valuable things we can do. It can be partly true. For example, instead of attending live sport events people can spend more time on visiting theatres, museums, cinemas, educational courser or events, etc. What is more, watching sports does not mean being sportive. That is why my oppenents argue that it is more useful for individual to do sports than to watch it. All in all, I would like to highlight that each person has his own opinion. I consider that having sports is essential part of our life and it's really crucial to go for sports and spend time on watching sports on TV or live to be awere of the situations which take place there.
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change
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many
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people
's attitudes towards the problem of watching
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sports
or going to
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watch
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sports
at the stadium.
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Some
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people
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think
that spending
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time
on
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sport
programs is
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very
useful, while others are against this point of view.
Personally
,
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I tand
to believe that this activity is
extremely
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important
in
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lives
of
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many
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people
.

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First of all
, watching
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sports
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make
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some
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people
feel amazing
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because
they like this type of activity and
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get
pleasure from seeing anything related to this topic.
For instance
, a large proportion of
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people
adore doing
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sports
and such
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people
usually
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love
spending their
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time
on going to
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sport
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events
or even taking part in
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some
competitions.
Secondly
, this activity can bring
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positive
emotions to your
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house
due to the fact that a person
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watches
TV or goes to
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see
football, tennis, basketball, and other
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sports
, with his relative and friends.
Moreover
, among
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people
there are
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a lot of
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sport
fans that cannot
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live
without
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sports
even a minute, they like not
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only
to
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watch
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sports
,
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but
also
to have a conversation with sportsmen.
For example
, my friend is keen on
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tennis and
he does not miss any Grand Slam finals, he visited Roland
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garros
, US Open, Australian Open. He met
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Federer
and
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Nadal
twice.

However
,
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some
individuals believe that, nowadays, there is much more valuable things we can do. It can be partly true.
For example
,
instead
of attending
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live
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sport
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events
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people
can spend more
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time
on visiting
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theatres
, museums, cinemas, educational courser or
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events
, etc.
What is more
, watching
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sports
does not mean being sportive.
That is
why my
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oppenents
argue that it is more useful for individual to do
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sports
than to
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watch
it.

All in all, I would like to highlight that each person has his
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own
opinion. I consider that having
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sports
is essential part of our life and it's
really
crucial to go for
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sports
and spend
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time
on watching
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sports
on TV or
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live
to be
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awere
of the situations which take place there.
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IELTS essay Some people say that watching sports (either on TV or at live sports events) is a waste of time. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
347 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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