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I LIKE TO GO ON A TRIP WITH MY FRIEND.

I LIKE TO GO ON A TRIP WITH MY FRIEND. 708kb

My parents have gave me a trip to Sapa as a gift for my efforts in the past school year and that trip was a memorable one for me because I have gone on that trip with my best friend. I think a trip will be boring if you don’t have a companion. Firstly, you can save some travel expenses because you will share it with you partner. You won't have to prepare everything by yourself. Secondly, when you travel with a companion, you will never feel lonely, sometimes the joy of a trip is not where you go, but who you will go with. To keep memories in that place is of course indispensable with virtual live photos. Moreover, it makes friendship more connected, has time to confide, to talk and understand each other better. So don't be afraid to invite your friends to go on a long trip.

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