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some people say that the only reasons for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some people say that the only reasons for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. eXGO
There is an era where everyone has to understand and master another language in addition to their native. It is often argued this is only the needs for travelling overseas and maybe working in a foreign country, whilst others disagree and think it has other beneficial things which can lead to fruitfulness. This essay agrees that an important advantage of mastering another language is not only for your career or trip overseas. It is clear that the language has provided everyone with access to communicate with other foreign pupils around the world. This has given workers or travellers the ability to develop themselves by their conversation, in order to brainstorm any ideas. For example, my father works as an engineer in Singapore’s Company, where he can simply handle the huge project and maybe gain access to in-depth knowledge easily. On the other hand, many disagree and feels that learning a foreign language has another important beneficial thing. There are some majority advantages besides only for workers and travellers, which helps us to build creativity in our brain. It is constructed indirectly by the way we communicate using another language with numerous words or vocabularies used by a native. Another interesting benefit is increased focus and concentration, where we could be filtering, which one is important and unimportant. By this consideration, everyone might be easier to become successful either in every matter or aspect, specifically our personal lives. For instance, I took myself as an example, by learning English, creativity has been built and it felt by me whenever I have to do my essay, project or my research. While the benefits of foreign languages, particularly to travel overseas and work, allows us to develop our mindsets limitlessly, some still feel that everyone should be gain another benefit from it. Eventually, as long as we can filter any important things, which prospected to our career ahead and has an enormous effect on our lives, it is totally positive.
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only
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foreign
country, whilst others disagree and
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other
beneficial things which can lead to fruitfulness. This essay
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that an
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advantage of mastering another
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language
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only
for your career or trip overseas.

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clear
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language
has provided
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everyone
with access to communicate with
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other
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foreign
pupils around the world. This has
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given
workers or
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travellers
the ability to develop themselves by their conversation, in order to brainstorm any
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ideas
.
For example
, my father works as an engineer in Singapore’s
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Company
, where he can
simply
handle the huge project and maybe gain access to in-depth knowledge
easily
.

On the
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other
hand,
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many
disagree and feels that learning a
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foreign
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language
has another
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important
beneficial thing. There are
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some
majority advantages
besides
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only
for workers and
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travellers
, which
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helps
us to build creativity in our brain. It
is constructed
indirectly
by the way we communicate using another
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language
with numerous words or vocabularies
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used
by a native. Another interesting benefit
is increased
focus and concentration, where we could be filtering, which one is
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important
and unimportant. By this consideration,
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everyone
might be easier to become successful either in every matter or aspect,
specifically
our personal
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lives
.
For instance
, I took myself as an example, by learning English, creativity has
been built
and it felt by me whenever I
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have to
do my essay, project or my research.

While the benefits of
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foreign
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languages
,
particularly
to travel overseas and work,
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allows
us to develop our mindsets
limitlessly
,
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some
still
feel that
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everyone
should be
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gain
another benefit from it.
Eventually
, as long as we can filter any
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important
things, which prospected to our career ahead and has an enormous effect on our
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lives
, it is
totally
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positive
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IELTS essay some people say that the only reasons for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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