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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. y91E
People have different views about the reasons for which some individuals are fond of learning a foreign language. While I completely agree with the statement that most people learn a new language in order to get a job or travel, I also believe there are others reasons that motivate people to consider the importance of learning a new dialect. Those who claim that travelling or working is the main motive for someone to take up a foreign language might argue that it is necessary to learn a local dialect of your host country when planning to go on holiday. This is because you will certainly interact with the local community and communication is the only way that can help you to find your feet in your new adventure. If a newcomer is not able to speak or even to learn some colloquial expressions, he or she would find his vacation tedious to some extent. Thus, the reasons for taking a new interest as language before going on vacation seem to be justified when considering the positive side of it. Therefore, there are further reasons why people want to learn a new language. Learning a foreign language for pleasure is one of them. Some individuals have no real reason to explain why they are taking up a new interest as learning an overseas language. They would argue that this is because they are fascinated by that dialect. Another reason is focus on local culture. Some individuals argue that they learn a language in order to broad their horizon about the local culture. And a direct connection between language and culture is thus seen as an effective way to follow. For example, it is becoming very popular to see many teenagers learning English because they want to apprehend what message American pop stars musicians convey as a message through their tunes. In conclusion, it is certainly true nowadays travelling and working is major areas that incentivize people to take up a foreign language. In addition to that, there are those who literally learn for pleasure and cultural goals. Clip to Evernote Ava Dec 27, 2016 23: 43 Topic: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Essay: This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! People have different views about the reasons for which some individuals are fond of learning a foreign language. People have different views about the reasons for which some individuals are fond of learning foreign languages. While I completely agree with the statement that most people learn a new language in order to get a job or travel, I also believe there are others reasons that motivate people to consider the importance of learning a new dialect. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Those who claim that travelling or working is the main motive for someone to take up a foreign language might argue that it is necessary to learn a local dialect of your host country when planning to go on holiday. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! This is because you will certainly interact with the local community and communication is the only way that can help you to find your feet in your new adventure. This is because you will certainly interact with the local community and communication is the only way that will help you to find your feet in your new adventure. If a newcomer is not able to speak or even to learn some colloquial expressions, he or she would find his vacation tedious to some extent. If a newcomer is not able to speak or even to learn some colloquial expressions, they would find their vacation tedious to some extent. It just sounds more fluid to use 'they' when gender is unknown, rather than 'he or she' and 'him or her': -) 1 people think this correction is good. Thus, the reasons for taking a new interest as language before going on vacation seem to be justified when considering the positive side of it. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Therefore, there are further reasons why people want to learn a new language. Therefore, there are further reasons why people want to learn a new language. It would be better to say 'However', as you aren't drawing conclusions from another point in this sentence Learning a foreign language for pleasure is one of them. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Some individuals have no real reason to explain why they are taking up a new interest as learning an overseas language. Some individuals have no real reason to explain why they are taking up a new interest in learning an overseas language. They would argue that this is because they are fascinated by that dialect. They might argue that this is because they are fascinated by that dialect. Another reason is focus on local culture. Another reason is to focus on local culture. Or 'to learn about a foreign culture' 1 people think this correction is good. Some individuals argue that they learn a language in order to broad their horizon about the local culture. Some individuals argue that they are learning a language in order to broaden their horizons about the local culture. 1 people think this correction is good. And a direct connection between language and culture is thus seen as an effective way to follow. And the direct connection between language and culture is thus seen as an effective way to follow. For example, it is becoming very popular to see many teenagers learning English because they want to apprehend what message American pop stars musicians convey as a message through their tunes. For example, it is becoming very popular to see many teenagers learning English because they want to apprehend what messages American pop stars musicians are conveying as a message through their tunes. In conclusion, it is certainly true nowadays travelling and working is major areas that incentivize people to take up a foreign language. In conclusion, it is certainly true nowadays that travelling and working are major areas that incentivize people to take up a foreign language. Would sound more natural to say 'travelling and working are major incentives for people to. . . ', I didn't even know that incentivize was a word! 1 people think this correction is good. In addition to that, there are those who literally learn for pleasure and cultural goals. In addition to that, there are those who solely learn for pleasure and cultural goals. 1 people think this correction is good. Well done! Your english is great, and you use a lot of synonyms for words you repeat, and congratulations if this is all from your vocabulary, but at times it starts to sound unnatural. For example, most people wouldn't say 'tunes'. If you say 'songs', a more common word, it would not make your english any less professional! Thank you for your correction! Persikov Dec 30, 2016 09: 49 Topic: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! People have different views about the reasons for which some individuals are fond of learning a foreign language. People have different views about the reasons for which some individuals are fond of learning a foreign language. // People have different views about the reasons for learning a foreign language. Grammatically correct, but I'm not convinced we're talking about "the reasons for being fond of" and not just "the reasons to" While I completely agree with the statement that most people learn a new language in order to get a job or travel, I also believe there are others reasons that motivate people to consider the importance of learning a new dialect. While I completely agree with the statement that most people learn a new language in order to get a job or travel, I also believe there are others reasons that motivate people to consider the importance of learning a new language. dialect =/= language Those who claim that travelling or working is the main motive for someone to take up a foreign language might argue that it is necessary to learn a local dialect of your host country when planning to go on holiday. Those who claim that travelling or working is the main motive for someone to take up a foreign language might argue that it is necessary to learn the local language of your host country when planning to go on holiday. This is because you will certainly interact with the local community and communication is the only way that can help you to find your feet in your new adventure. This is because you will certainly interact with the local community and communication is the only way that they can help you (to) find your feet in your new adventure. If a newcomer is not able to speak or even to learn some colloquial expressions, he or she would find his vacation tedious to some extent. Newcomers who are not able to speak or even to learn some colloquial expressions will find their vacation tedious to some extent. Thus, the reasons for taking a new interest as language before going on vacation seem to be justified when considering the positive side of it. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Therefore, there are further reasons why people want to learn a new language. However, there are further reasons why people want to learn a new language. Learning a foreign language for pleasure is one of them. This sentence is perfect! No correction needed! Some individuals have no real reason to explain why they are taking up a new interest as learning an overseas language. Some individuals have no real reason to explain why they are taking up a new interest such as learning an overseas language. 'such as' introduces examples They would argue that this is because they are fascinated by that dialect. They might argue that this is because they are simply fascinated by/ interested in that language. And a direct connection between language and culture is thus seen as an effective way to follow. And A direct connection between language and culture is thus seen as an effective way to follow. [? ? ] For example, it is becoming very popular to see many teenagers learning English because they want to apprehend what message American pop stars musicians convey as a message through their tunes. For example, it is becoming very common to see many teenagers learning English because they want to understand what message American pop stars musicians convey as a message through their tunes. Nice job Thank you for your correction! kkvl French English 15 Entries Written 11 Corrections made 28 Corrections received Mar 2021 S M T W T F S 28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Journal Statistics Total This month This week 13 Entries Written 0 Entries Written 0 Entries Written Latest entries Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. (2) People should be allowed to continue to work for as long as they want to, and not to be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65. (2) Topic: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. 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local
culture.

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good
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people
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foreign
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good
.

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for
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and cultural goals.

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.

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english
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use
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a lot of
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people
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word
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english
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Dec 30, 2016 09: 49

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reasons
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language.

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planning
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to go on holiday.

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new
adventure.

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some
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expressions
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to
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extent.

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speak
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expressions
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extent.

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language
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vacation
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when considering the
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positive
side of it.

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sentence
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perfect
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that this is
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fascinated
by that dialect.

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language
and
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is
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as an
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way to follow.

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between
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teenagers
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they
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what
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common to
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learning
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because
they
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stars
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musicians
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work
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IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Essay
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102 paragraphs
2072 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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