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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. kVNn
Certainly, to have a live in a foreign country could means oral communication in other language, it might cause several social and cotidian issues. I completely agree with this. So, let me explain in order to justify mi opinion. Nowdays, Chile has had a tremendous inmmigration from other countries, the case most representative is Haiti. In that sense, these people do not speak Spanish and when they express your ideas, can not communicate. Spanish language in Chile is scencial to live, due to the fact it is a principal communicate code. Thus, for Haiti inmmigrants is expecially complicated has oral interactions. In my experience, I studied in Barcelona for one year. In this place, the population spoke Catalàn, one particular language with Latin origins. In my first moth there, in despite of people could speak Spanish (because Catalunya is part of Spain) I could not undertand nothing, due to the fact that they feel a special proud of their culture, so they just speak Catalàn every time. Thus, I had an obligation to learn this language, it was a challenge for me. Fortunetelly, I did great native friends in Barcelona, who help me in my oral expression. Finally I got to communicate in this leanguage, then a very long period of time. To conclude, I think that is really importat to know about language in the case of someone will want to live in other country, because it could try serious problems. On the contrast, if it do not enough knowledge about language, it will have a long period of learning process.
Certainly
, to have a
live
in a foreign country could
means
oral communication in other
language
, it might cause several social and
cotidian
issues. I completely
agree
with this.
So
,
let
me
explain
in order to justify mi opinion.

Nowdays
, Chile has had a tremendous
inmmigration
from other countries, the case most representative is Haiti. In that sense, these
people
do not speak Spanish and when they express your
ideas
, can not communicate. Spanish
language
in Chile is
scencial
to
live
, due to the fact it is a principal communicate code.
Thus
, for Haiti
inmmigrants
is
expecially
complicated has oral interactions.

In my experience, I studied in Barcelona for one year. In this place, the population spoke
Catalàn
, one particular
language
with Latin origins.
In
my
first
moth there, in despite of
people
could speak Spanish (
because
Catalunya
is part of Spain) I could not
undertand
nothing, due to the fact that they feel a special proud of their culture,
so
they
just
speak
Catalàn
every time.
Thus
, I had an obligation to learn this
language
, it was a challenge for me.
Fortunetelly
, I did great native friends in Barcelona, who
help
me in my oral expression.
Finally
I
got
to communicate in this
leanguage
, then a
very
long period of time.

To conclude
, I
think
that is
really
importat
to know about
language
in the case of someone will want to
live
in other country,
because
it could try serious problems. On the contrast, if it
do
not
enough
knowledge about
language
, it will have a long period of learning process.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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