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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. mRR8
Nowadays, people have various views about difficulties which environment have struggled with them in recent years, a number of people believed most essential problems related to the decreasing number of plants and animals and other group think in various way. I think both of them are crucial a lot for global. This is immensely obvious that one of the difficulties that modern society have suffered from it is extinction of a number of species of animals and plants. It is undeniable that wide range of wild animals have been faced with danger of extinction in recent years. For instance, the number of Iranian’s tiger have reduced enormously in last decades. Furthermore, population of some specific plants on the earth, from east to west and north to south decreased rapidly in compare to any other time. The lack of plants have various reasons from harvesting them for some purposes such as production of tobacco or using them as food resource. There is not any doubt that our environment have been threatened by other kinds of problems too. In the most of the cities that located all around the world especially in modern and developed cities, people have encountered with great massive of air pollution. It can cause of a number of hazardous disease and cancers in modern time. Also, wide range of our planet suffered from water pollution due to various reasons such as. oil leakage in oceans or chemical infection etc. Furthermore, in tropical areas, some businesses are deployed to exploit from sources of forest such as trees and this lead to logging and developing of timber industry and concluded to deforestation. All the mentioned reasons lead to one critical issue that we name it (climate change). In conclusion, our existing world have been influenced by various type of problems in recent years and in my opinion each of them has its value and it should be tackled in right way and there is nothing superior over other thing.
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both of them are crucial a lot for global.

This is
immensely
obvious that one of the difficulties that modern society have suffered from it is extinction of a
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number
of species of animals and
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plants
. It is undeniable that wide range of wild animals have
been faced
with
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danger
of extinction in recent years.
For instance
, the
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number
of Iranian’s tiger have
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reduced
enormously
in last decades.
Furthermore
, population of
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some
specific
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plants
on the earth, from east to west and north to south decreased
rapidly
in compare to any
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other
time. The lack of
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plants
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have
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various
reasons from harvesting them for
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some
purposes such as production of tobacco or using them as food resource.

There is not any doubt that our environment have
been threatened
by
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other
kinds of problems too. In the most of the cities that located all around the world
especially
in modern and developed cities,
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people
have encountered with great massive of air pollution. It can cause of a
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number
of hazardous disease and cancers in modern time.
Also
, wide range of our planet suffered from water pollution due to
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various
reasons such as. oil leakage in oceans or chemical infection etc.
Furthermore
, in tropical areas,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
businesses
are deployed
to exploit from sources of forest such as trees and this lead to logging and developing of timber industry and concluded to deforestation. All the mentioned reasons lead to one critical issue that we name it (climate
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change
).

In conclusion
, our existing world have
been influenced
by
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various
type of problems in recent years and in my opinion each of them has its value and it should
be tackled
in right way and there is nothing superior over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
thing.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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