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"Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?"

"Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? " JxxD

As far as living is concerned I think both options are good for living but it depends on your expenses because living in our house is quit expensive than living in the apartment because house rent is more higher than an apartment and some advantages are living in the house because mostly people have their on parking area garden area and play area for children which is not possible in apartment but some disadvantages like in a house people have less get together with their neighbour however, in the apartment mostly people because apartment are very close to to each other and make gathering of the people and also law budget living cost in apartment and but I would like to prefer to live in the house.

As far as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
is concerned
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 both options are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it depends on your expenses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
is quit
Use "(expensive)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(expensive)
expensive
 than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 rent is Use only "higher" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.higher
more higher
 than an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advantages are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
mostly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have their on parking area garden area and play area for children which is not possible in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantages like in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have less This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together with their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
however
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
mostly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 close Possible typo: you repeated a wordto
to to
 each other and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 gathering of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and also
 law budget You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 cost in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would like to prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. 