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"Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?"

"Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? " JxxD
As far as living is concerned I think both options are good for living but it depends on your expenses because living in our house is quit expensive than living in the apartment because house rent is more higher than an apartment and some advantages are living in the house because mostly people have their on parking area garden area and play area for children which is not possible in apartment but some disadvantages like in a house people have less get together with their neighbour however, in the apartment mostly people because apartment are very close to to each other and make gathering of the people and also law budget living cost in apartment and but I would like to prefer to live in the house.
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IELTS essay "Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? "

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127 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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