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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others is there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is fact that, in current time, extension of species and some plant is the major concern. However, a group of thinkers believe that there are another environmental problems such as acid rain, increasing temperature is the the greater trouble than other problems. Both the views have its own reasons. Before commencing my view both the points will be discussed further. Examining the former opinion, supporters are worrying about the the major environmental problem which is loosing some types of animals and plants. There are two main reasons for this situation firstly, although public is aware of the environmental problem, they do not prevent deforestation. More and more houses are built that caused the deforestation. Secondly, layman is not only responsible for the situation, but also government is not taking proper actions. This is because implimented legislations are not followed properly by public. On the contrary, other supporter's view suggest that there are many other problems which are more important than the function of plants and breeds of animals such as acid drain and hike in temperature. This occurs because of the depletion of Ozone layer and massive use of motor vehicles. It can be caused of major illness such as asthma and cancer. For instance, in Delhi and Mumbai pollution is uncontrolled. Slightly temperature is rising and people are suffering from disease. In conclusion, I will say that spreading awareness among people about environmental problems is the best way to solve these troubles. This can be done through government by employing rules for saving environment.
It is fact that, in
current
time, extension of species and
some
plant is the major concern.
However
, a group of thinkers
believe
that there are another
environmental
problems
such as acid rain, increasing temperature is
the the
greater trouble than other
problems
. Both the views have its
own
reasons.
Before
commencing my view both the points will
be discussed
further
. Examining the former opinion, supporters are worrying about
the the
major
environmental
problem
which is loosing
some
types of animals and plants. There are two main reasons for this situation
firstly
, although public is aware of the
environmental
problem
, they do not
prevent
deforestation. More and more
houses
are built
that caused the deforestation.
Secondly
, layman is not
only
responsible for the situation,
but
also
government
is not taking proper actions. This is
because
implimented
legislations are not followed
properly
by public.
On the contrary
, other supporter's view suggest that there are
many
other
problems
which are more
important
than the function of plants and breeds of animals such as acid drain and hike in temperature. This occurs
because
of the depletion of Ozone layer and massive
use
of motor vehicles. It can
be caused
of major illness such as asthma and cancer.
For instance
, in Delhi and Mumbai pollution
is uncontrolled
.
Slightly
temperature is rising and
people
are suffering from disease.
In conclusion
, I will say that spreading awareness among
people
about
environmental
problems
is the best way to solve these troubles. This can
be done
through
government
by employing
rules
for saving environment.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others is there are more important environmental problems.

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