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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. RKkp
It is debatable is you that were responsible for environmental manos according to one school of thought extinction of plants and creators is a prime cause where is other people's opinion that there are also other factors which are responsible however in this essay I will critic for the aspects of performing my own opinion advocates of disappear of plants and which have negative impact on Environment on account of this it is a cheap logic of concerned primarily by reason of these pairs of ecosystem food chain would be break and which will form environmental crisis for instance the tiger is dependent on dear and dear is reliable on grass, it would be create issue if there would be diode does other wall will focus on vegetable due to this scarcity of food would be created adding more heat to eat on account of hacking of temperature of the Arctic which cause melt the ice hands it will directly affect the habitat on the other hand there are also other factors are accountable for environmental issue one of the former prison is climate change for illustration by means of drought and providing which could create impact on production of food is a result that of food will be created what is water pollution is other dangerous factor which creates impact on other human being as well as live stocks for cash going to continuously enhancing of industries it will create more CO2 which has potential to not only deplete the Ozone Layer but also individuals why causing chronic melodies in my opinion not only extension of memory but also other factors are accountable for create the environmental damage in conclusion There are several factors are concerned that it can be controlled by authority by help of imposing heavy duty penalties.
It is debatable is you that were responsible for
environmental
manos
according to one school of
thought
extinction of plants and creators is a prime cause where is
other
people
's opinion that there are
also
other
factors
which are responsible
however
in this essay I
will critic
for the aspects of performing my
own
opinion advocates of disappear of plants and which have
negative
impact on Environment on account of this it is a
cheap
logic of concerned
primarily
by reason of these pairs of ecosystem
food
chain would be break and which will form
environmental
crisis
for instance
the tiger is dependent on dear and dear is reliable on grass, it would be
create
issue if there would be diode does
other
wall will focus on vegetable due to this scarcity of
food
would
be created
adding more heat to eat on account of hacking of temperature of the Arctic which cause melt the ice hands it will
directly
affect the habitat on the
other
hand there are
also
other
factors
are accountable for
environmental
issue one of the former prison is climate
change
for illustration by means of drought and providing which could
create
impact on production of
food
is a result that of
food
will
be created
what is water pollution is
other
dangerous
factor
which
creates
impact on
other
human being
as well
as
live
stocks for cash going to
continuously
enhancing of industries it will
create
more CO2 which has potential to not
only
deplete the Ozone Layer
but
also
individuals why causing chronic melodies in my opinion not
only
extension of memory
but
also
other
factors
are accountable for
create
the
environmental
damage
in conclusion
There are several
factors
are concerned
that it can
be controlled
by authority by
help
of imposing
heavy duty
penalties.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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  American English
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301 words
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