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What are the pros and cons of using public transportation?

What are the pros and cons of using public transportation? a3E7
In recent times, public transportation has become increasingly important. There are a lot of benefit of using public transport as well as there are also some problems associated with it. The merits and demerits of public transport will be discussed in this essay. One of the major benefits of using public transport is that it reduces air pollution. When more and more people use public transport, there will be fewer private cars on the road. This helps reduce air pollution and thus improve air quality. In addition, some means of public transport such as high-speed trains, trams and hybrid buses cause zero pollution because they run on electricity. Another advantage is that people can be more productive while taking public transportation. When you are driving, you need to focus on the road ahead of you. But if you take public transportation, you can finish an assignment, read a book or focus on your daily task. On the downside, taking public transport can be an uncomfortable experience during rush hours. Getting stuck in an overcrowded bus or train for an hour or so every morning and evening is not a pleasant experience for anyone. In addition, public transport can be unsafe in cities where the crime rate is high as it increases your risk of getting robbed. For instance, pocket picker a common crime that can be notice and experience by many people. In conclusion, public transport is a good way to get around, especially in cities where its frequency and reliability are quite good. However, taking a bus or train during rush hours is uncomfortable. Even so, in my opinion, the advantages of public transport outweigh the disadvantages.
In recent times,
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transportation has become
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important
. There are
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benefit of using
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as well
as there are
also
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some
problems associated with it. The merits and demerits of
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public
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will
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in this essay.

One of the major benefits of using
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is that it
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reduces
air pollution. When more and more
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people
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use
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, there will be fewer private cars on the road. This
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helps
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reduce
air pollution and
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improve
air quality.
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means of
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such as high-speed trains, trams and hybrid
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buses


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cause
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because
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Another advantage is that
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people
can be more productive while taking
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transportation. When you are driving, you need to focus on the road ahead of

you.
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if you take
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transportation, you can finish an assignment, read a book or focus on your daily task.

On the downside, taking
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can be an uncomfortable experience during rush hours. Getting stuck in an overcrowded bus or train for an hour or
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every morning and evening is not a pleasant experience for anyone.

In addition
,
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can be unsafe in cities where the crime rate is high as it increases your
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risk
of getting robbed.
For instance
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many
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people
.

In conclusion
,
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is a
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good
way to
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good
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, taking a bus or train during rush hours is uncomfortable. Even
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, in my opinion, the advantages of
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outweigh the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay What are the pros and cons of using public transportation?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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