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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The world is polarized into two contrasting perspectives, where one section of society vehemently believes that the principal worry for the environment at the moment is the extinction of specific flora and fauna, while the other opines that there are additional environmental predicaments present which are crucial. In my opinion, I consider that depletion of ozone layer dur to green house gass emission and other problems are crucial. On the one hand, it is thought by a few individuals that the leading environmental complication is disappearance of certain wildlife. One of the prominent reason behind this is plants and animals maintains the biodiversity and each species play important role to keep it's integrity. So tgere survival is essential for natural habitat. Furthermore, if any of the plant and animal died out then it will be impossible for the next generation to see and learn about that particular form of creature. As an illustration, disappearance of black tiger has made non-viable for us to see them physically. On the other hand, some persons think that there are various other worries of environment that are of more importance and I agree. I. Other words, complications such as global warming are undoubtedly more alarming than the one mentioned in the previous paragraph, because emission of green house gases reducing the potency of ozone layer which consequently inducing the global warming and it has dire effect on the health of human being and on the natural habitat. For example, increase in the of cancer patients dur to radiation of sun and ultraviolet light as well as inclination of yearly temperature. To conclude, while people may vary in their views, I think that problems like global warming should be given more importance to overcome, as it has detrimental effect on both human and nature.
The world
is polarized
into two contrasting perspectives, where one section of society
vehemently
believes that the principal worry for the environment at the moment is the extinction of specific flora and fauna, while the
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other
opines that there are additional environmental predicaments present which are crucial. In my opinion, I consider that depletion of ozone layer
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dur
to green
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house
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gass
emission and
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other
problems are crucial.

On the one hand, it is
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thought
by a few individuals that the leading environmental complication is disappearance of certain wildlife. One of the prominent reason behind this is plants and animals maintains the biodiversity and each species play
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important
role to
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keep
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it's
integrity.
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So
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tgere
survival is essential for natural habitat.
Furthermore
, if any of the plant and animal
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died
out then it will be impossible for the
next
generation to
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see
and learn about that particular form of creature. As an illustration, disappearance of black tiger has made non-viable for us to
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see
them
physically
.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
persons
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think
that there are various
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other
worries of environment that are of more importance and I
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agree
. I.
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Other
words, complications such as global warming are
undoubtedly
more alarming than the one mentioned in the previous paragraph,
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because
emission of green
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house
gases reducing the potency of ozone layer which
consequently
inducing the global
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warming and
it has dire effect on the health of human being and on the natural habitat.
For example
, increase in the of cancer patients
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dur
to radiation of sun and ultraviolet light
as well
as inclination of yearly temperature.

To conclude
, while
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people
may vary in their views, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that problems like global warming should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
more importance to overcome, as it has detrimental effect on both human and nature.

IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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