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Many argue that currently we are surrounded by a plethora of options and numerous choices in almost every aspect of life.

Many argue that currently we are surrounded by a plethora of options and numerous choices in almost every aspect of life. Consequently, these choices might even go beyond our control in some cases. I believe despite all the precious freedom we have gained, we still ought to live with infinite limitations as well. These limits always outnumber our choices and eventually we are compelled to opt among certain choices. Recently, we have developed up to date tools and facilities that are providing a handful of diverse options in every case. For example, by abolishing the obsolete computers and displacing the with brand new sophisticated ones, now we are able to gain access over millions of databases merely in a milisecond, which is a choice that was not even rational to imagine two decades ago. On the contary, even though we made an astonishing progress in this way and we, more or less, have managed to diminish plenty of limitations, many bottlenecks are still present. Limitations and problems caused due to geographical position are still a critical matter. Everyday many Asian children lose their hopes and enthusiasms as they get quenched and eventually cease to exist in light of sanctions or regional and territorial anomalies. As conclusion, Although we face tons of diverse choices in front of us every second, but there are also immensly different stops. In addition, options are innocuous mostly. Henceforth, this variety of options shall not be considered as a halt.
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Many
argue that
currently
we
are surrounded
by a plethora of
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options
and numerous
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choices
in almost every aspect of life.
Consequently
, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
choices
might even go beyond our control in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases. I believe despite all the precious freedom we have gained, we
still
ought to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with infinite limitations
as well
. These limits always outnumber our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
choices
and
eventually
we
are compelled
to opt among certain choices.

Recently, we have developed up to date tools and facilities that are providing a handful of diverse
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
options
in every case.
For example
, by abolishing the obsolete computers and displacing the with brand new sophisticated ones,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
we are able to gain access over millions of databases
merely
in a
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milisecond
, which is a
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choice
that was not even rational to imagine two decades ago.

On the
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contary
,
even though
we made
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an astonishing progress
in this way and we, more or less, have managed to diminish
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plenty
of limitations,
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many
bottlenecks are
still
present. Limitations and problems caused due to geographical position are
still
a critical matter.
‘Everyday’ is an adjective. Did you mean “every day”?
Everyday
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many
Asian children lose their hopes and enthusiasms as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
quenched and
eventually
cease to exist in light of sanctions or regional and territorial anomalies.

As conclusion, Although we face tons of diverse
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choices
in front of us every second,
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but
there are
also
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immensly
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different
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stops
.
In addition
,
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options
are innocuous
mostly
. Henceforth, this variety of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
options
shall not
be considered
as a halt.

IELTS essay Many argue that currently we are surrounded by a plethora of options and numerous choices in almost every aspect of life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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