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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

"Life is the best gift of god and environment is a blessing"The environment plays an important role in everyone's life cycle. Our environmental conditions affect our lives major part. Where some people believe that the main environmental problem is the loss of particular plants and animals, some believe that there are more important environmental issues. The subsequent paragraph elaborates more on the view with an appropriate illustration. We have studied in our childhood that there is a particular life cycle that is followed by nature. We, humans, are one of the main features of that cycle with other species like plants, animals, climate, etc. Yes, animals and plans do play a vital role in environmental problems, it is believed that humans are removing all the natural habitats to built their own. If this continues, the main problem can be the loss of plants and animals. For instance, the paper is made from trees. Every year millions and billions of trees are cut to produce papers. If this is still carried out in the future we may end up creating a major issue. On the other hand, some people believe we have several other important problems in our environment. Like, pollution, On average the air breathability of the world and especially some major countries are decreasing rapidly. Our invention of the car, industries, plastic wrappers, and many more is creating big damage to the environment. Air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution, and what not is affecting human life and also the natural life cycle we have. In my opinion, I believe that both issues are causing our life. Animals and plans are important for our survival vis-a-versa we are important for their survival. Meanwhile keeping our environment free from pollution or any other environmental problem is also very crucial. We have to build our lives with love and compassion for nature.
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Life is the best gift of god and
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environment
is a blessing
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environment
plays an
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important
role in everyone's
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life
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cycle
. Our
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environmental
conditions affect our
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lives
major part. Where
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some
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people
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believe
that the main
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environmental
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problem
is the loss of particular plants and
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animals
,
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some
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believe
that there are more
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important
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environmental
issues. The subsequent paragraph elaborates more on the view with an appropriate illustration. We have studied in our childhood that there is a particular
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life
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cycle
that
is followed
by nature. We, humans, are one of the main features of that
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cycle
with
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other
species like plants,
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animals
, climate, etc. Yes,
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animals
and plans do play a vital role in
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environmental
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problems
, it
is believed
that humans are removing all the natural habitats to built their
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own
. If this continues, the main
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problem
can be the loss of plants and
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animals
.
For instance
, the paper
is made
from trees. Every year millions and billions of trees are
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cut
to produce papers.
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If
this is
still
carried out in the future we may
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end
up creating a major issue. On the
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other
hand,
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some
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people
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believe
we have several
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other
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important
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problems
in our
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environment
. Like,
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pollution
, On average the air breathability of the world and
especially
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some
major countries are decreasing
rapidly
. Our invention of the car, industries, plastic wrappers, and
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many
more is creating
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big
damage to the
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environment
. Air
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pollution
, noise
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pollution
, water
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pollution
, and what not is affecting human
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life
and
also
the natural
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life
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cycle
we have. In my opinion, I
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believe
that both issues are causing our
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life
.
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Animals
and plans are
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important
for our survival
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vis-a-versa
we are
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important
for their survival.
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Meanwhile
keeping our
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environment
free from
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pollution
or any
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other
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environmental
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problem
is
also
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very
crucial. We
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have to
build our
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lives
with
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love
and compassion for nature.

IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.

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