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Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

Bicycle is one of the human-oriented transportation which is serve the purpose of environment conservation. Some people argue that bicycle as a transportation mode has a numerous advantages, whereas others believe that using this mean the most has own negative repercussions. I would argue that notwithstanding the fact that this mode of transportation might be more hazardous, however, the benefits of riding bicycle far outweigh the risks.
Bicycle is one of the human-oriented transportation which is serve the purpose of environment conservation.
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argue that bicycle as a transportation mode has
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IELTS essay Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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