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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. 3OgX

Healthy life is one of the most integral item for the humans living. However, despite increasing sport facilities would be assist to the individuals' health, l feel that sport will be very useful way to help people than other things. Firstly, in this period, thare are many sport in the worldwide such as box, football and other. So individuals should go to these sport to be more healthy and they ought to throw away the fault life style that give you all bad unhealthy time. Moreover, give up the calories is not very easy thing so that in this life humans should take the diate. However, it is not anough. Because, without sport they could not get the result.

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sport
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very
 useful way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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people
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So
 individuals should go to these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
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 to be more Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).healthy, and
healthy and
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bad
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very
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so
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, it is not Possible spelling mistake found.enough
anough
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Because
, without You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 they could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the result. 