Smoking is dangerous for health and it evolves lung cancer and subsequent death. In recent years people are using tobacco as a fashion. Some people say that making illegal in the public is the only solution. While others insist on other ways to deal. In my opinion, the adequate way to prevent is the enforcement of a handsome amount of penalty and banned for teenagers.
On the one hand, some people argue for other ways to handle it. According to survey almost, 40% of the World population is drug addicted. This is the responsibility of the Government. First and foremost, the State should impose some strict rules to the Tobacco companies. Furthermore, banned for adults. Moreover, time to time awareness programs conducted such as Tv shows and seminars about the tobacco companies and their consequence.
On the other hand, some people say that making illegal in the public is the best way. However, the consequences of smoking can be deleterious to anyone. For example, like a bus stop on every road same as a smoking area must be there. As a result, the public will be safe from these addicted people's acts. Besides, if anybody breaks the rule, the best way is a penalty. By doing so everyone will follow the laws.
In summary, there is no doubt that tobacco is a silent killer. I believe that the element which is more considerable to reduce the level of addiction is a penalty. In this way, the chances of reduction are more and increase in fear also.
Smoking is
dangerous
for health and it evolves lung cancer and subsequent death. In recent years
people
are using
tobacco
as a fashion.
Some
people
say that making illegal in the public is the
only
solution.
While
others insist on
other
ways
to deal. In my opinion, the adequate
way
to
prevent
is the enforcement of a handsome amount of penalty and banned for
teenagers
.
On the one hand,
some
people
argue for
other
ways
to handle it. According to survey almost, 40% of the World population is drug addicted. This is the responsibility of the
Government
.
First
and foremost, the State should impose
some
strict
rules
to the
Tobacco
companies
.
Furthermore
, banned for adults.
Moreover
, time to time awareness programs conducted such as
Tv
shows
and seminars about the
tobacco
companies
and their consequence.
On the
other
hand,
some
people
say that making illegal in the public is the best
way
.
However
, the consequences of smoking can be deleterious to anyone.
For example
, like a bus
stop
on every road same as a smoking area
must
be there.
As a result
, the public will be safe from these addicted
people
's acts.
Besides
, if anybody breaks the
rule
, the best
way
is a penalty. By doing
so
everyone will follow the laws.
In summary, there is no doubt that
tobacco
is a silent killer. I believe that the element which is more considerable to
reduce
the level of addiction is a penalty. In this
way
, the chances of reduction are more and increase in fear
also
.
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