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Some people say that restaurants are a waste of time. They claim that preparing food at home is cheaper, more economical and healthier

Some people say that restaurants are a waste of time. They claim that preparing food at home is cheaper, more economical and healthier 3g5Dw
From my point of view, it depends on situation of person, if you are wealthy enough to go out and have a meal at restaurant or if you do not have enough money to buy and prepare it inside of home. Usually I prefer to make food inside of house, my main reason is that I can be carefull with preparing food to be healthy enough without any unwanted dirt in my meals. It can be more cheaper and more healthier also more economical to make the food you wanted at home rather than outside. It is true every person who works in resturaunts has a health certificate which shows he/she passed the course relating to making food. But my idea is that even though you can not be sure if all the equipment they use in restaurant are clean, in one condition I accept the cleaness and healthy of equipments, if they have inspector or quality conttrol in their job, and that person or section is seprated from whole staff making food, and should be under manager directly. If they have Q. C. unit, certainly I will go to the restaurant, because if you find out that the food prepared inadeqatelly and if you had any complain you could ask Q. C, unit to check and they report to manger immediately. If we consider those things, I think ther price of food goes very high, but it is worthy, because you can be sure the meal you are eating is completly healthy. Another point of view is ingridient, the way the restaurants prepare food may be was not good enough for your taste, for instance may be you do not like ginger to be used in your food, and when you found out, it will cause you to be unhappy of your meal. Finally If I am well informed about a good restaurant which is according to my taste and I am pretty sure about healthy food and other things which I decribed also have enough money to guest my self, I would not hesitate to go out, and have a meal in restaurat but If I am in shortage of money I prefer to prepare my food at home and I am pretty sure It tast very well.
From my point of view, it depends on situation of person, if you are wealthy
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to go out and have a meal at
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restaurant
or if you do not have
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enough
money to
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and

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prepare
it inside of home.

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food
inside of
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, my main reason is that I can be
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carefull


with preparing
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food
to be healthy
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enough
without any unwanted dirt in my meals.

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more cheaper
and
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more healthier
also
more economical to
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the
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you

wanted at home
rather
than outside.

It is true every person who works in
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resturaunts
has a health certificate which
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shows


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he
/she passed the course relating to making
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food
.
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my
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idea
is that
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can not be
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sure
if all the equipment they
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use
in
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restaurant
are clean, in one condition

I accept the
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cleaness
and healthy of equipments, if they have inspector or quality

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conttrol
in their job, and that person or section is
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seprated
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food, and should be under manager
directly
. If they have Q. C. unit,
certainly
I will go

to the
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restaurant
,
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because
if you find out that the
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food
prepared
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inadeqatelly
and if

you had any complain you could ask Q. C, unit to
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they report to manger immediately.

If we consider those things, I
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ther
price of
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goes
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high,
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it is

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worthy
,
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sure
the meal you are eating is
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completly
healthy.

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ingridient
, the way the
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restaurants
prepare
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food
may be
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not

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good
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for your taste,
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may be
you do not like ginger to be
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used
in your

food, and when you found out, it will cause you to be unhappy of your meal.

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If I am
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well informed
about a
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good
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restaurant
which is according to my
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taste and
I am pretty
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about healthy
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food
and other things which I
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also
have

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money to guest my self, I would not hesitate to go out, and have a meal in

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restaurat
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but
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food
at home and I

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am
pretty
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It
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tast
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well.
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IELTS essay Some people say that restaurants are a waste of time. They claim that preparing food at home is cheaper, more economical and healthier

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380 words
5.5
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