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cat is animal that have long hair and softly. I have once, but he dead when I was child. His name is Alex, he cute with black white hair. Today I remember him, I miss him so much. But it's not along time, I can forget him, coz I already have a new cat. NO. it's not a cat, but he is a dog, I got from my unclebro. His name is Exel. Exel from Bali, actually he is kitamani dog. he is intelligent and cute. Can u imagine him. he suddenly make me falling love with him.
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cat
is animal that have long hair and
softly
. I have once,
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but
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he
dead when I was child. His name is Alex,
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he
cute with black white hair.
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Today
I remember him, I miss him
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so
much.
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But
it's not
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along time
, I can forget him,
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coz
I already have a new cat. NO. it's not a cat,
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but
he is a dog, I
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got
from my
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unclebro
. His name is
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Exel
.
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Exel
from Bali, actually he is
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kitamani
dog.
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he
is intelligent and cute. Can u imagine him.
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he
suddenly
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make
me falling
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love
with him.

IELTS essay cat is animal that have long hair and softly

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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