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Some people say that raising pets is beneficial while others disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that raising pets is beneficial while others disagree. Q2WNL

According to some people, raising pets is beneficial to human’s life while others disagree. In my opinion, pets are human’s friends, bringing multiple benefits to the mental health of people. However, I also think that there are still some limitations to this trend. Lots of people in this world love and raising pets, governments have also introduced certain pet laws. We all see some advantage when having a pet. Pets can help people to get out of loneliness and pressure. Some scientists have demonstrated with some children who have major depressive disorder. They see that depressive children who play with pets will recover faster. Some people said that the moment they touched that fuzzy fur, they felt like warm and peace. Raising animals can help us to increase our muscle with fun exercise. Moreover, you can train your pet to do what you like. Catch a ball, do some tricks and have fun together.

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