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some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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Now a days environment is extremely important issue in this world. Some people believe that, government should responsible the surraunding. Other's agree with human responsible. I strongly believe that every people should take care of the environment. In my view, human should be love the nature, so on nature will love us too. for instance, do not throw the rubbish on the street, be clean the rivers, plant trees as you much can. Addition, government will legislate, we should follow the law. Accordingly, human's consciousness is greatly important. On the other hand, people destoy the nature themselves. For instance, I will write a little story about the tree. Unce upon a time there was a boy, who playing with the tree everyday. When he was a young, he used to play with the tree everyday after school. time gone, boy grow up he came to the tree less, one day he came to th tree but he cried. He said that, I am man now, I do not have enough money, then tree gives him his apple. It continuous, tree has nothing to left. At the result, human must protect the environment, follow the rude the parliament policy.
Now a days
environment is
extremely
important
issue in this world.
Some
people
believe that,
government
should responsible
the
surraunding
.
Other's
agree
with human responsible. I
strongly
believe that every
people
should take care of the environment. In my view, human should be
love
the nature,
so
on nature will
love
us too.
for
instance, do not throw the rubbish on the street, be clean the rivers, plant
trees
as you much can. Addition,
government
will legislate, we should follow the law.
Accordingly
, human's consciousness is
greatly
important
.
On the other hand
,
people
destoy
the nature themselves.
For instance
, I will write a
little
story about the
tree
.
Unce
upon a time there was a boy, who playing with the
tree
everyday
. When he was a young, he
used
to play with the
tree
everyday
after school.
time
gone, boy grow up he came to the
tree
less, one day he came to
th
tree
but
he cried. He said that, I am
man
now
, I do not have
enough
money, then
tree
gives him his apple.
It
continuous,
tree
has nothing to
left
. At the result, human
must
protect the environment, follow the rude the parliament policy.
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IELTS essay some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it.

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