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some people say that protecting the environment is the dovernment's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

some people say that protecting the environment is the dovernment's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it. 3aYWd
Every human live in one world. Even though some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. In my view, I believe that every individual should be responsible for it. For instance, the government takes care of the environment and improves it, but people don’t care, it won't work. Also, contrary individuals take care of the environment, and every people planting trees, cleaning trash, to save water we can keep environment healthy. All in all, nature and environment need a every human participation.
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some
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people
say that protecting the
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environment
is the
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government
’s responsibility. In my view, I believe that every individual should be responsible for it.

For instance
, the
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government
takes care of the
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environment
and
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improves
it,
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but
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people
don’t care, it won't work.
Also
, contrary individuals take care of the
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environment
, and every
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people
planting trees, cleaning trash, to save water we can
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keep
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environment
healthy.

All in all, nature and
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environment
need
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every human participation.

IELTS essay some people say that protecting the environment is the dovernment's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it.

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