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some people say that protecting the environment is the dovernment's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

some people say that protecting the environment is the dovernment's responsibility. others believe that every should be responsible for it. 3aYWd

Every human live in one world. Even though some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. In my view, I believe that every individual should be responsible for it. For instance, the government takes care of the environment and improves it, but people don’t care, it won't work. Also, contrary individuals take care of the environment, and every people planting trees, cleaning trash, to save water we can keep environment healthy. All in all, nature and environment need a every human participation.

Every human This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in one world. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 say that protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
’s responsibility. In my view, I believe that every individual should be responsible for it.

For instance
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 takes care of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 don’t care, it won't work. Also
, contrary individuals take care of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
, and every This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 planting trees, cleaning trash, to save water we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 healthy.

All in all, nature and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 need Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 every human participation. 