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Some people say that products should be designed to last as long as possible. Others say that it is more important for products to be as cheap as possible. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days it can be seen that the contour of the products magnetize people's attention more than the price. Many people purchase items in the market not only for its cheaper price, but for its attracting vision. Some claim it is the design to be of importance and others advocate the inexpensive cost. This essay intends to delve into both views. I, however, side with the latter view. Products are one of the basic human needs that should be satisfied. The cheaper the products, the more increase the demand will be. If they were costly, those from the poorer layer of the society could not afford them, causing mainly poverty and health problems. For instance, many underprivileged people in India are only able to buy bread and other edible food and seldom do they purchase clothes that are needed for health in the cold weather. On the other hand, the visibility of the products are kept in favour so as to increase the demand for them. People advocating this view claim that although price is not in the limelight, the contour of the commodity should be kept in focus if they intend to boost people's confidence. In particular, the new- branded televisions in Chorsu bazaar in Tashkent attract more public attention than the ones sold in Abu- Sahi bazaar. This is because of the fact that the televisions in Chorsu bazaar are specifically- designed to magnetize the public's eyes. Taking everything into account, no matter how important the design of the products are, it is more significant to pay attention to the cheaper price of the products if they want to boost the economy and improve the lives of the poor
These days it can be
seen
that the contour of the
products
magnetize
people
's attention more than the
price
.
Many
people
purchase
items in the market not
only
for its cheaper
price
,
but
for its attracting vision.
Some
claim it is the design to be of importance
and others
advocate the inexpensive cost. This essay intends to delve into both views. I,
however
, side with the latter view.

Products are one of the basic human needs that should
be satisfied
. The cheaper the
products
, the more increase the demand will be. If they were costly, those from the poorer layer of the society could not afford them, causing
mainly
poverty and health problems.
For instance
,
many
underprivileged
people
in India are
only
able to
buy
bread and other edible food and seldom do they
purchase
clothes that
are needed
for health in the
cold
weather.

On the other hand
, the visibility of the
products
are
kept
in
favour
so as to
increase the demand for them.
People
advocating this view claim that although
price
is not in the limelight, the contour of the commodity should be
kept
in focus if they intend to boost
people
's confidence.
In particular
, the new- branded televisions in
Chorsu
bazaar in Tashkent attract more public attention than the ones sold in Abu-
Sahi
bazaar. This is
because of the fact that
the televisions in
Chorsu
bazaar are
specifically
- designed to magnetize the public's eyes.

Taking everything into account, no matter how
important
the design of the
products
are, it is more significant to pay attention to the cheaper
price
of the
products
if they want to boost the economy and
improve
the
lives
of the poor
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IELTS essay Some people say that products should be designed to last as long as possible. Others say that it is more important for products to be as cheap as possible.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
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