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Now a days children join extra coaching classes apart from the school studies something it is important for future and other think that this time spent on games agree or disagree.

Now a days children join extra coaching classes apart from the school studies something it is important for future and other think that this time spent on games agree or disagree. yNnRl
Education is crucial thing for everyone that our future is based on a tab in modern era people attend extra coaching tuitions that is a part from their school studies it is an essential for their future on the contrary people argue that scholar sequined at this time on playing sports I partly with these statements and discuss both view and subsequent. To embark with first point of view extra tuition classes are important for everyone that every people get more extra knowledge about their school studies that help them to improve their learning skills as well as more intelligent apart from it peoples are fikra of learning more things that there 10 extra coaching classes it is an essential thing for their career scholars do not do only studies which related to the school studies they also have an extra knowledge about their education for the more students are more intelligent due to the fact that did extra work which increase knowledge and they become well cognisance. on the second hand with other point of view profile should not attend extra coaching classes due to facts they also do study at school then there is need for relax they play a number of sports and learn many things for instance how to competition with other and become a candid person moreover not only education but sports are also more essential things for students due to fact it helps them to improve their mental and physical power without health a person do not do nothing playing games are the best method to sense relax and remove stress. To sum of according to my point of view both are important for people due to fact scholars do both work according to their time that helps them in the future and earn more knowledge.
Education
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is crucial
thing for everyone that our future
is based
on a tab in modern era
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people
attend
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extra
coaching
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tuitions
that is
a part from their
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school
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studies
it is an essential for their future
on the contrary
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people
argue that scholar sequined at this time on playing sports I partly with these statements and discuss both
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view
and subsequent. To embark with
first
point of
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view
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extra
tuition classes are
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important
for everyone that every
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people
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get
more
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extra
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knowledge
about their
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school
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studies
that
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help
them to
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improve
their learning
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skills
as well
as more intelligent apart from it
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peoples
are
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fikra
of learning more things that there 10
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extra
coaching classes it is an essential thing for their career scholars do not do
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only
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studies
which related to the
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school
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studies
they
also
have an
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extra
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knowledge
about their education for the more students are more intelligent
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due
to the
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fact
that did
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extra
work which increase
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
knowledge and
they become well
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cognisance
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
on
the second hand with other point of
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view
profile should not attend
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extra
coaching classes
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due
to facts they
also
do
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study
at
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school
then there
is need
for relax they play a number of sports and learn
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many
things
for instance
how to competition with other and become a candid person
moreover
not
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only
education
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but
sports are
also
more essential things for students
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due
to
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fact
it
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helps
them to
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improve
their mental and physical power without health a person do
Double negatives are discouraged in standard English. Can you reformulate this phrase or is a comma missing?
not do nothing
playing games are the best method to sense relax and remove
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stress
. To sum of according to my point of
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view
both are
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important
for
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people
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due
to
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fact
scholars do both work according to their time that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them in the future and earn more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
.
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IELTS essay Now a days children join extra coaching classes apart from the school studies something it is important for future and other think that this time spent on games agree or disagree.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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