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museums and galleries are needed

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The most obvious benefit of museums and art galleries is bringing people authenticity that computers cannot do. These allow us to contemplate artworks seen with one’s own eyes led to having real experience; therefore, it is reasonable for us to go to museums and galleries to enjoy historical objects instead of watching on the screen of a computer. Additionally, feeling remnants' authenticity led to developing a sense of respect towards it
The most obvious benefit of museums and art galleries is bringing
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people
authenticity that computers cannot do. These
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allow
us to contemplate artworks
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seen
with one’s
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own
eyes led to having real experience;
therefore
, it is reasonable for us to go to museums and galleries to enjoy historical objects
instead
of watching on the screen of a computer.
Additionally
, feeling remnants' authenticity led to developing a sense of respect towards it

IELTS essay museums and galleries are needed

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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