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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Purchasing things online is a trend nowadays and is often argued to have its advantages and disadvantages on the part of the shoppers. In my own belief, it is more convenient to shop online than going to physical stores. Firstly, you don't have to take an extra effort to go to physical stores and qeue to pay. With just one click using your mobile phones or computers, you can purchase almost everything. For instance, groceries usually have long qeue especially during the holidays. To save yourself from standing for too long to pay for your purchases, you can use a mobile app instead. Purchasing online will definitely save you a lot of time and energy. On the other hand, online shopping has its disadvantages too, especially in terms of specificity. When you buy things online, it is not 100% guaranteed that you will receive the exact item that you want to buy. For example, when you shop for a clothing online there is a slight chance that the color and the size will differ the moment you receive the item. Some of the factors that can affect these are the lighting used when taking a photo of the item to be posted online. In terms of sizes, since you cannot have the item fitted before paying for it, there is a minimal possibility that the clothing is not your size. There isn't a full security when paying off things online since the shopper cannot check the items physically. In conclusion, whether shopping in bazaars or through digital devices both have its incentives and consequences but I find scrolling through my mobile more favorable.

Purchasing things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 is a trend nowadays and is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 argued to have its advantages and disadvantages on the part of the shoppers. In my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 belief, it is more convenient to shop You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 than going to physical stores.

Firstly
, you don't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take an extra effort to go to physical stores and Possible spelling mistake found.queueQue
qeue
 to pay. With This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one click using your mobile phones or computers, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 almost everything. For instance
, groceries usually
 have long Possible spelling mistake found.queueQue
qeue
especially
 during the holidays. To save yourself from standing for too long to pay for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 a mobile app instead
. Purchasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 will definitely save you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time and energy.

On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 shopping has its disadvantages too, especially
 in terms of specificity. When you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
, it is not 100% guaranteed that you will receive the exact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
 that you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
. For example
, when you shop for a clothing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 there is a slight chance that the color and the size will differ the moment you receive the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
. If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?Some
Some of the
 factors that can affect these are the lighting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 when taking a photo of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
 to be posted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
. In terms of sizes, since you cannot have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
item
 fitted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 paying for it, there is a minimal possibility that the clothing is not your size. There isn't a full security when paying off things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 since the shopper cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
physically
.

In conclusion
, whether shopping in bazaars or through digital devices both have its incentives and consequences This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I find scrolling through my mobile more favorable. 