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Some people say that it is possible to tell alot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people say that it is possible to tell alot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes v. 2
Fashion is more crucial nowadays. Everyone wants to look better and build their own personality. However, can we really judge a person' s traits and traditions through his/her clothes? I am not 100% sure about this statement. I will discuss this conundrum in this essay. Firstly, in this world of globalization and in every cosmopolitan city, T-shirts and pants are popular in every person. If we say this is a trend dressing of every in these days than it' s not a false obligation. For example, what if different races and color people are wearing 2 piece suit in a party then how can you identify his ethnicity. People occasionally wear their traditional dresses with the modern touch of their society. In this situation, we cannot tell about one’s cultural personality. Moreover, what if everyone wears a turban or in a certain place, every woman wears a veil than how do you say every woman is a Muslim and every turban man is Sikh. Next, if we want to know a person’s values and character from his/her appearance than this can be a misleading outcome. For instance, if a businessman gets dirty his clothes by an accident than we wouldn’t judge him as a poor man. Furthermore, a woman coming from a party and wearing a miniskirt than you won’t tell that she is a bad woman or even worse a prostitute. In essence, we can’t judge a person' s value by his dirty clothes as a poor man or a woman as a bad person by his short clothes and we can’t tell about someone tradition by seeing his /her dress because there is a common dressing in the world in recent days.
Fashion is more crucial nowadays. Everyone wants to look better and build their
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own
personality.
However
, can we
really
judge a
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person&
#039; s traits and traditions through his/her
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clothes
? I am not 100% sure about this statement. I will discuss this conundrum in this essay.

Firstly
, in this world of globalization and in every cosmopolitan city, T-shirts and pants are popular in every
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person
. If we say this is a trend dressing of every in these days than
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it&
#039; s not a false obligation.
For example
, what if
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different
races and color
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people
are wearing
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2 piece
suit
Unless you mean "in a political party," the usual preposition for a party is "at." Did you mean, "at a party"?
in a party
then how can you identify his ethnicity.
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People
occasionally
wear their traditional dresses with the modern touch of their society. In this situation, we cannot
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tell
about one’s cultural personality.
Moreover
, what if everyone wears a turban or in a certain place, every
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woman
wears a veil than how do you say every
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woman
is a Muslim and every turban
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man
is Sikh.

Next
, if we want to know a
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person’s
values and character from his/her appearance than this can be a misleading outcome.
For instance
, if a businessman
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gets
dirty his
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clothes
by an accident than we wouldn’t judge him as a poor
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man
.
Furthermore
, a
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woman
coming from a party and wearing a miniskirt than you won’t
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tell
that she is a
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bad
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woman
or even worse a prostitute.

In essence, we can’t judge a
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person&
#039; s value by his dirty
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clothes
as a poor
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man
or a
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woman
as a
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bad
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person
by his short
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
clothes and
we can’t
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tell
about someone tradition by seeing his /her dress
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because
there is a common dressing in the world in recent days.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell alot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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