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Some people say that it is possible to tell about a person's culture and character from their choice. Do you agree or disagree?

These days some people believe that kind of cloths which wearing people make their person's culture. I want to say about this issue and i partially disagree with this essay. In resent years, unfortunetely people more and more aspect to appearance of another people and try to have relevant with person's that wealthier than other people. In my opinion these issue between people cause new culture. In addition, Wrong habit among people that cause social enomalous. This happen in one society after long time cause change to culture and also people accepted for becoming fact. For example, in some community some persons wear simple cloths and have behavior simple and always smiling. On the other hand, more than of these people really wealthy, even they growing with this way in the simple family. On the other side, this issue is to be change. For instance some people wearing expensive cloths and also they have convenience life but when they start to talk whit them, they are un culture and talking very bad. Un fortunetely you con see these kind of people in about your city. Ofcorse is invers this issue in the society there fashionable and cultured people who always help people charetis, even if they are not famous or popular. In conlosion, ibeliev that we can't judge people by day their clothing, whether a person is cultured or not. In some up money and luxe care can not bring culture for each one.
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believe that kind of cloths which wearing
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make
their person's
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culture
. I want to say about this
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issue
and
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i
partially
disagree with this essay. In resent years,
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unfortunetely
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more and more aspect to appearance of another
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people
and try to have relevant with person's that wealthier than other
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people
. In my opinion these
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issue
between
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people
cause new
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culture
.
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In
addition,
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habit among
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people
that cause social
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enomalous
.
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This happen
in one society after long time cause
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culture
and
also
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people
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accepted
for becoming fact.
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, in
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community
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persons wear simple cloths and have behavior simple and always smiling.
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, more than of these
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people
really
wealthy, even
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they growing
with this way in the simple family. On the other side, this
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issue
is to be
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change
.
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some
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people
wearing expensive cloths and
also
they have convenience life
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when they
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start
to talk
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whit
them, they are
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un
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culture
and talking
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.
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fortunetely
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these kind
of
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people
in about your city.
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is
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invers
this
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issue
in the society there fashionable and cultured
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people
who always
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help
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people
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charetis
, even if they are not
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famous
or popular. In
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conlosion
,
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ibeliev
that we can't judge
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people
by day their clothing, whether a person
is cultured
or not. In
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some
up money and
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luxe
care can not bring
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culture
for each one.
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IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell about a person's culture and character from their choice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
244 words
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