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some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s believed by some that the kind of clothes that the person wears reflect his nature and character. Firstly, this essay will discuss how you can predict the nature of people from the choice of their clothes. Secondly, the connection between people’s nature and their selection of colour’s clothes. In my opinion, I agree that a person’s culture can be predicted from their wearing of clothes. On the one hand, there is no doubt that people select their clothing that suits them not only in terms of size but also that reflect their character. Obviously, people purchasing their clothes from shops having their favourite clothes. For instance, persons that their character clam you find their choice of colours normal and most of their clothes semi-formal while the people whose character like fashion their selection of colour conspicuous. This often results in reflecting the nature of people. On the other hand, the recent research conducted on many people to find out the connection between their selection of clothes and their nature. The results confirmed this connection and prove that people’s nature can be predicted from their wearing. For example, the BBC News published the research that has been conducted in the US and found that 70 per cent of people’s character predicted by the choice of their wearing. In conclusion, the kind and colour of the clothes can easily reflect a person’s nature. In my opinion, I agree that clothes can give you the first impression of people’s character
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and
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.
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people
from the choice of their
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.
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people’s
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nature
and their selection of
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. In my opinion, I
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culture can
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people
select their clothing that suits them not
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purchasing their
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clothes
from shops having their
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that their
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clam you find their choice of
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normal and most of their
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semi-formal while the
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people
whose
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character
like fashion their selection of
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conspicuous. This
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results in reflecting the
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nature
of
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people
.

On the other hand
, the recent research conducted on
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people
to find out the
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connection between
their selection of
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clothes
and their
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nature
. The results confirmed this connection and prove that
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people’s
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nature
can
be predicted
from their wearing.
For example
, the BBC News published the research that has
been conducted
in the US and found that 70 per cent of
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people’s
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character
predicted by the choice of their wearing.

In conclusion
, the kind and
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colour
of the
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clothes
can
easily
reflect a
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person’s
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nature
. In my opinion, I
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agree
that
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can give you the
first
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people’s
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character
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IELTS essay some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
247 words
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