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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? v.10

Clothing makes people more elegant. For the selection of the dress, the individual has their own freedom. Many of them saying, may the connection with the people attire and their society. I agree with that because the costumes are reflecting the personality and tradition. Firstly, culture has a significant role in selecting a wearing’s. People are using different ways of dressing on the whole over the world. The outfit not only shows the culture but also it represents the social status. Moreover it is varying from one state to another. In India the dressing may be categorized in two ways for instance western wear and traditional. Many of them prefer modern wearing. Even though, mostly they choose based on their traditions. It shows the diversity of culture. Therefore, people pick various styles of dress related to their culture. Secondly, there are some connections between look and their character. The culture resembles the behavior of one group. Mostly the way you dress is the sign of your education, lifestyle, beliefs and prestige. For instance the people who are related to the high class, and one who comes from the middle class, dressed up entirely different. Usually plethora of them are following the strict norms of their community. But the person choosing the modern dress they were enjoying their lives more. Sometimes the trends cross beyond the countries. It helps to exchange the values. To summarize, the nation’s following multicultural styles, and If we observe keenly there are some relation with culture and personality of the individual.
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Moreover
it is varying from one state to another. In India the dressing may
be categorized
in two ways
for instance
western wear and traditional.
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of them prefer modern wearing.
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they choose based on their traditions. It
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shows
the diversity of
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.
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,
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pick various styles of
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related to their culture.

Secondly
, there are
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connections between look and their character. The
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culture
resembles the behavior of one group.
Mostly
the way you
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dress
is the
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sign
of your education, lifestyle, beliefs and prestige.
For instance
the
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who
are related
to the high
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, and one who
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from the middle
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, dressed up
entirely
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different
.
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plethora of them are following the strict norms of their community.
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But
the person choosing the modern
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dress
they were enjoying their
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lives
more.
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Sometimes
the trends cross beyond the countries. It
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helps
to exchange the values.

To summarize
, the nation’s following multicultural styles, and If we observe
keenly
there are
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some
relation with
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culture
and personality of the individual.
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IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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