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Some people say that in all of education , from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills

Some people say that in all of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills 7XRX
Some people thought Education system is not enough for students to make there practical skill but it is kill long time their. It is very commonly say maximum people. In our education system it is very slow to take examination and generally they take very few practical classes. If you want to be a good skill worker you have to take more practical knowledge from your practical class. More of the first world country’s give enough practical lessons for their students.
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worker you
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IELTS essay Some people say that in all of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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