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Some people say that government should  make public transportation free to all users. Do you agree or Disagree?

Some people say that government should make public transportation free to all users. 5bX3n
Public transportation is important now a days have a different views about government ough to allocate more to their budget to mass transit, for all citizens. I generally agree with this viewpoint, as a focus on urban transit will be an essential component of environmental sustainability. The main reasons a number of people have a positive attitude towards free public transportation it saves a lot of money. Unsuitable for long distance and bulky traffic, slow speed and accidental or breakdown. Firstly, Public shipment can ease the issue of thectraffic jam which is caused by increasing vehicles. Public transportation is a form of travel offered locally that enables morecpeople to travel together along designated routes. Secondary, public shipment over personal commuting can be your best pick equally when it comes to relaxation and collecting travel experience. Increasing the cost of private commuting is also a good option an array of countries have raised the road tax and permit rates for private cars. Public commuting is cheap, but it also the best for our environment and peoples health as well it can reduce the pollution. People do not have to breath  polluted air. In addition a further advantage is that using public transport car preserve the environment. If People have their own car they can pay a lot of money for services, repairs and insurance.
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important
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now a days
have a
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government
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to allocate more to their budget to mass transit, for all citizens.

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generally
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agree
with this viewpoint, as a focus on urban transit will be an essential component of environmental sustainability.

The main reasons a number of
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people
have a
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positive
attitude towards free
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public
transportation it saves
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a lot of
money. Unsuitable for long distance and bulky traffic, slow speed and accidental or breakdown.

Firstly
,
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Public
shipment can
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ease
the issue of
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thectraffic
jam which
is caused
by increasing vehicles.
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Public
transportation is a form of travel offered
locally
that enables
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morecpeople
to travel together along designated routes.

Secondary,
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public
shipment over personal commuting can be your best pick
equally
when it
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comes
to relaxation and collecting travel experience. Increasing the cost of private commuting is
also
a
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good
option an array of countries
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have
raised the road tax and permit rates for private cars.
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Public
commuting is
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cheap
,
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but
it
also
the best for our environment and
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peoples
health
as well
it can
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reduce
the pollution.
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People
do not
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have to
breath
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polluted air.

In
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addition
a
further
advantage is that using
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public
transport car preserve the environment. If
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People
have their
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own
car they can pay
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a lot of
money for services, repairs and insurance.

IELTS essay Some people say that government should make public transportation free to all users.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
223 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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