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may people think that books are the best source of learning than others. discuss and give your opinion

may people think that books are the best source of learning than others. discuss and give your opinion MlOo6
IT IS A WELL KNOWN FACT THAT EVERY BEING LEARNS NEW THINGS EVERYDAY TILL THE END OF HIS LIFE. MANY PUPIL BELIEVE BOOKS AS THE BEST SOURCE OF LEARNING THAN OTHER MEANS. I BELIEVE THAT THERE IS NO SUCH BEST SOURCE OF LEARNING AS EVERY GARDEN HAS ITS WEEDS. TO BEGIN WITH, BOOK IS ONE OF THE MOST COMMON AND OLDEST WAY OF LEARNING. WHILE IT IS VERY EASILY ACCESSIBLE AND IS MOST SUITABLE WAY FOR LEARNING HISTORY IN DETAIL, NOW-A -DAYS READING FROM BOOKS HAS BECOME A RATHER BORING AND TEDIOUS TASK. FUTHER, BOOKS ALSO HAVE A DISADVANTAGE OF DETERIORATING PAPER QUALITY THROUGH THE COURSE OF TIME. MOREOVER, USAGE OF BOOKS FOR SEARCHING SPECIFIC FACTS IS COMPARATIVELY MORE TIME CONSUMING THAN SOME NEW WAYS OF LEARNING AND USAGE OF PAPER MADE FROM TREES ALSO MAKES IT LESS FRIENDLY FOR ENVIRONMENT AS TRESS ARE DECREASING BECAUSE OF OTHER HUMANLY NEEDS TOO. ON THE OTHER HAND, LEARNING THROUGH THE HELP OF INTERNET WHICH INCLUDES SOCIAL MEDIA SITES AND APPS BENEFIT LEARNERS WHO PREFER VISUAL LEARNING. WHILE, UNLIKE BOOKS DIGITAL LEARNING IS MORE ENVIRONMENT FRIENDLY AND ALSO EASILY ACCESSIBLE ANYTIME AND ANYWHERE ONLY WITH A DEVICE CONNECTED TO INTERNET, SOME LEARNERS CAN MISUSE THIS ADVANTAGE AS INSTANCE FOR CHEATING IN AN EXAMINATION. OTHER WAY OF LEARNING IS FROM EXPERIENCE FOR EXAMPLE, LEARNING THINGS PRACTICALLY IS PREFERRED BY MANY AS ONE CAN LEARN FROM THERE MISTAKES AND FAILURES FACED WHICH CANNOT BE DONE BY READING BOOKS. OVERALL, SOURCES OF LEARNING GO HAND IN HAND AND NONE IS SUPERIOR THAN OTHERS.
IT IS A WELL KNOWN FACT THAT EVERY BEING LEARNS NEW THINGS
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TILL THE
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PUPIL BELIEVE
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BOOKS
AS THE BEST SOURCE OF
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LEARNING
THAN
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OTHER
MEANS. I BELIEVE THAT THERE IS NO SUCH BEST SOURCE OF
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LEARNING
AS EVERY GARDEN HAS ITS WEEDS.

TO
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BEGIN
WITH,
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BOOK
IS ONE OF THE MOST COMMON AND OLDEST WAY OF
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LEARNING
. WHILE IT IS
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VERY
EASILY
ACCESSIBLE AND IS MOST SUITABLE WAY FOR
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LEARNING
HISTORY IN DETAIL,
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NOW
-A -DAYS READING FROM
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BOOKS
HAS BECOME A
RATHER
BORING AND TEDIOUS TASK.
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FUTHER
,
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BOOKS
ALSO
HAVE A DISADVANTAGE OF DETERIORATING PAPER QUALITY THROUGH THE COURSE OF TIME.
MOREOVER
, USAGE OF
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BOOKS
FOR SEARCHING SPECIFIC FACTS IS
COMPARATIVELY
MORE TIME CONSUMING THAN
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SOME
NEW WAYS OF
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LEARNING
AND USAGE OF PAPER MADE FROM TREES
ALSO
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MAKES
IT LESS FRIENDLY FOR ENVIRONMENT AS TRESS ARE DECREASING
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OF
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HUMANLY
NEEDS TOO.

ON THE
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OTHER
HAND,
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LEARNING
THROUGH THE
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HELP
OF INTERNET WHICH INCLUDES SOCIAL MEDIA SITES AND APPS BENEFIT LEARNERS WHO PREFER VISUAL
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LEARNING
. WHILE, UNLIKE
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BOOKS
DIGITAL
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LEARNING
IS MORE ENVIRONMENT FRIENDLY AND
ALSO
EASILY
ACCESSIBLE ANYTIME AND ANYWHERE
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ONLY
WITH A DEVICE CONNECTED TO INTERNET,
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SOME
LEARNERS CAN MISUSE THIS ADVANTAGE AS INSTANCE FOR CHEATING IN AN EXAMINATION.

OTHER WAY OF
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LEARNING
IS FROM EXPERIENCE
FOR EXAMPLE
,
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LEARNING
THINGS
PRACTICALLY
IS PREFERRED
BY
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MANY
AS ONE CAN LEARN FROM THERE MISTAKES AND FAILURES FACED WHICH CANNOT
BE DONE
BY READING BOOKS.

OVERALL
, SOURCES OF
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LEARNING
GO HAND IN HAND AND NONE IS
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SUPERIOR THAN
OTHERS.
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IELTS essay may people think that books are the best source of learning than others. discuss and give your opinion

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6.5
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