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Some people say that government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings . Do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some people say that government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. B255
Few individuals believe that the governing bodies should destroy all the historical buildings and replace them with modern buildings. I disagree with this statement because historical places show the culture and provide the knowledge and generate money for the society. The government should not destroy the historical place because a lot of tourists visit these place every year. The visitors see the old picture related to culture. Some information is written on the inside related to the picture. By seeing these kids know about culture. For instance, in the U. K schools organise the tour for the children to visit historical places. When the tourist visit these historical places they pay high cost to see the culture for seeing the pictures. The government earn high money for the society and the government use this money in many ways like development of historical places, schools, road etc. For instance in the sheesh mahal killa the government organise fair every year and earn a lot of money. To sum up, the authorities should not break down the historical place because many tourists visit here every year and get a knowledge about the old culture. Government earn more money to the society.
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the tour for the children to
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they pay high cost to
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every year and earn
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. To sum up, the authorities should not break down the
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historical
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place
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because
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tourists
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a knowledge about the
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to the society.

IELTS essay Some people say that government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
199 words
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