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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? qJWp
Countries all over the world are facing crucial challenges, not only relating to the environment but also population and education. In this essay, I will list several potential problems China will be facing in the next ten years. Firstly, China is overpopulated, currently at 1. 3 billion people. China recently executed the 'two children' policy, and I believe this new policy will lead to aggressive population growth in the next 10 years. China had the policy of 'one child, one family' that aimed to control the population as it's known as the biggest population size in the world. I believe overpopulation is a serious challenge for China in the next ten years, and the population size might hit over 2 billion or more. What's more, the extreme distinguish of education level between rural and urban area. The education level for people in the urban area is usually college or universities compared to high school or even primary school in the rural area. Due to the fact that fewer teachers willing to stay in the rural area as their income is low and the poor conditions. The government should give more compensation to the teachers who stay in the rural area and put more funds into facilities development. Lastly, there is a great concern on the environmental factors, such as air pollution. China has been actively developing its economy, but the side effect is the damage to the environment. China is known as an industrial country and tons of CO2 has left in the air. People from China are suffering from intense air quality. It impacts our health, and a number of people even got lung cancer from constantly breathing from the polluted air. In the next ten years, air condition might get worse if the government does not introduce a regulation to control the CO2 emission. Overall, the challenges that China will be facing in the next 10 years are overpopulation, the unbalanced education level between rural and urban areas, and extreme air pollution.
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also
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population
and
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education
. In this essay, I will list several potential problems China will be facing in the
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ten years.

Firstly
, China
is overpopulated
,
currently
at 1. 3 billion
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people
. China recently executed the 'two children' policy, and I believe this new policy will lead to aggressive
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population
growth in the
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next
10 years. China had the policy of 'one child, one family' that aimed to control the
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population
as it's known as the biggest
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population
size in the world. I believe overpopulation is a serious challenge for China in the
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next
ten years, and the
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population
size might hit over 2 billion or more. What's more, the extreme distinguish of
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education
level between
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rural
and urban
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area
. The
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education
level for
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people
in the urban
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is
usually
college or universities compared to high school or even primary school in the
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rural
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area
. Due to the fact that fewer teachers willing to stay in the
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rural
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area
as their income is low and the poor conditions. The
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government
should give more compensation to the teachers who stay in the
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rural
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area
and put more funds into facilities development.

Lastly
, there is a great concern on the environmental factors, such as
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air
pollution. China has been
actively
developing its economy,
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but
the side effect is the damage to the environment. China
is known
as an industrial country and tons of CO2 has
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left
in the
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air
.
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People
from China are suffering from intense
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air
quality. It impacts our health, and a number of
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people
even
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got
lung cancer from
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breathing from the polluted
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air
. In the
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next
ten years,
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air
condition might
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worse if the
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government
does not introduce a regulation to control the CO2 emission.

Overall
, the challenges that China will be facing in the
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next
10 years are overpopulation, the unbalanced
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education
level between
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rural
and urban
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areas
, and extreme
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air
pollution.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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